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Thank you. You read the whole thing one night?? You must be a fast reader. Elwood read it too. I know about that part where it was too much, I just save that part so I remember and figure out the good way to smooth out those long paragraphs. It was the first draft I wrote. I wrote this true story in three weeks flat and I never went back to edit my work yet. I know it needs to smooth it out. I just type and type nonstop till the end. And the story is not complete yet. I was going to work on it real soon. I want to finish it first, then go back to edit each chapters at a time. It was really hard for me to go back and finish the story.
An agent only saw my first work. They haven't seen my other work and the memoir yet. So was an agent right that my weakness was the POV (point of view) and structures?
Just send me email and I will let you know what I think. Thank you!! Talk to you soon.
I read the story in one night, yes but assumably I was awake until 630am in the next morning as I was chatting to a new american dude on ooVoo (Video call/MSN like) and it was awesome I have been learning ASL lately, LOL.. and yes, I sent you a email with the attachment.