The Ultimate Child?

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does that sound good to you? what does this title make you feel?

reason I ask is because this is a possible title for my book. as it is about a man who's only destiny and job was to keep earth safe and to keep it from destroying humanity.

( thats a very brief summary at this point, it will be LOADS better than that.)

if this does do well, I shall make a series out of it :D

but please do tell me what you think of the book.
 
That title makes me think of someone trying to create a perfect child.

From the description you've given us, it doesn't sound like a good title.

I would recommend the following...

The Perfect Earth

Creating the Perfect Earth

The Ingredients to Creating the Perfect Earth
- this would be good for a series because each part of the series would be an "ingredient"

Perfecting the Elements
- Earth, Air, Fire, Water (this would be good for a series with each part being an element)
- different philosophy can be used such as Chinese philosophy or Japanese philosophy because they have more and different elements
- Classical element - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Saving Humanity

Rescue Operation: Humanity
 
yeah, thats what my title meant, the perfect child. Well no one's perfect in a sense, but he will be raised in that perspective. The time era in this book is set in the old days, where there were no electricities. he came from a tribal family. and his parents discussed before having a child that they need a person who can deal with practically anything, any huge crises that happens around the world overtime ( this over time I just said is actually 1-1,000,000,000 years apart.)

how? you'll have to read the story :D

but I think it'll be kick ass, this book I"m writing will be about his earlier days and the first big crisis that occurs. and I'm hoping to use actual historical events in the books' part, with him being in that history instead, so I'm actually just modifying what happens in most histories. but very interesting I would say.

so with that said, I appreciated the feedback you gave me, but I understand that I may have said something wrong somehow, he isn't really saving earth, I meant that as long as there are human, there is war, and that could possibly be the end of us someday ( in the far future!) billions and billions of years later I hope rather than some 100 years. but when that time nears up, who's there to prevent that? the main character of the book. but he can only live in a human lifetime (60-100 years old usually) but I have this trick.. that'll prolong his need in the world. almost indefinitely.
 
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