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AJ

AJ

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life is hell
and hell is life
and only a belief
can end all the strife.
something to wrap around you
and put you to bed
something to take all the fears and worries
out of your head.
something to ease your mind
and heal your heart
something that allows
a new life to start.
but what is acceptable?
and what is exceptional?
does it have to stay hidden?
or can it be talked about
around the table?
How do u know if its right
or wrong?
but then again who exactly
says if its right
or wrong.
Sheryl Crowe once said
"if it makes you happy
it cant be that bad.
if it makes you happy
then why the hell are
you so sad?"
my answer to her question
is, because while it
makes me happy,
it distants me from others.
so in this world,
im supposed to follow others
and be miserable.
rather than follow my
own heart
and be happy.
i am to conform to others beliefs
to be accepted
and to be loved.
because apparently even though
im his child
god hates me because
i dont believe in hell.
why does god hate?
and why are we supposed to fear him?
if he loves us
why would he send us to burn
for beyond forever if
we make a mistake?
instead of supporting me,
why does god laugh at me
when i tell him my plans?
i dont understand why god does that
but apparently thats the god im
supposed to worship.
im supposed to worship a hateful god
and at the same time of worshipping
im supposed to be afraid of him.
so while i blacken my heart and my soul
to believe in what YOU believe
to be accepted,
i would like to say to all of you
fuck you for slamming others
beliefs.


sorry for not rhyming through out the whole poem. but near the middle i wasn't concerned about rhyming. and no its not directed towards any one person.
 
Dude, poetry is about expression. That's what makes your poem so good. I'm glad you shared it with us.

What really resonates with me is this excerpt:

"if it makes you happy
it cant be that bad.
if it makes you happy
then why the hell are
you so sad?"
 
Endymion said:
Dude, poetry is about expression. That's what makes your poem so good. I'm glad you shared it with us.

What really resonates with me is this excerpt:

"if it makes you happy
it cant be that bad.
if it makes you happy
then why the hell are
you so sad?"
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thanks


and miss p i reported you. i think its very disrespectful to post your OWN poem in mine. u could have made ur own post to do that. ur just looking for attention. so i asked for it to be removed.
 
AJ said:
thanks


and miss p i reported you. i think its very disrespectful to post your OWN poem in mine. u could have made ur own post to do that. ur just looking for attention. so i asked for it to be removed.
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I dont see any problem? Everyone knows that you wrote your poem on your first post. Miss P just wanted to explain or ask. Miss P should have written her another color text on your orginial color quotation...

Is that ok?
 
Interesting poem, AJ. :mrgreen: Thanks for sharing with us.
 
Endymion is correct, poems are more of expressing your feelings out, and it makes it even more intesting to hear a person pouring their heart out.....

Very nice poem and very well written.... Keep it up AJ then one day you will be a poem writter that will win a thousand of women's heart even Kelly's too :giggle:
 
^Angel^ said:
Endymion is correct, poems are more of expressing your feelings out, and it makes it even more intesting to hear a person pouring their heart out.....

Very nice poem and very well written.... Keep it up AJ then one day you will be a poem writter that will win a thousand of women's heart even Kelly's too :giggle:
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Who's Kelly? This sounds juicy! ;)
 
^Angel^ said:
Very nice poem and very well written.... Keep it up AJ then one day you will be a poem writter that will win a thousand of women's heart even Kelly's too :giggle:
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lol yeah right....like that is gonna happen

Endy she's talking about Kelly Clarkson. i have a serious crush on her.
 
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