emptiness

[bbnt]

The emptiness I feel,
Now that you are gone,
Can’t be filled by anyone,
To me that would be wrong.

I can't explain my feelings,
I never really could,
The hole that you have left,
Runs deep, I knew it would.

I do not really know,
Where I go from here,
You’ve been so much a part of me,
To be alone is what I fear.

When I close my eyes and sleep,
In my dreams your always there,
Then I wake and see your not,
I feel frustration and despair.


David

 

[Freaky]

*HUGS* bbnt!! That's a very good poem.. it gave me goosebumps! Keep posting up your poetry because you do have a gift!

 

[CatoCooper13]

Golly, another side to BBNT! That was very touching and I love it. Hope you keep on writing poetry as it's really nice.

 

[pinkster]

You write well Feels like you're echoing everything i've ever felt. Great job!

 

[MsGiglz]

*sniffs*.. its so good..

thats how i feel when i was loney..

 

[gothika]

aww

 

[Fly Free]

wow bbnt -- very well written poem! i agree with Freaky -- u do have a gift for poetry as well!

 

[Oddball]

I can relate to that poem. I feel it sometimes.

 

[bbnt]

Thanks everyone

 

[Liza]

good stuff, david.. how about writing a book someday? i bet you've got that up your sleeve.

 

[LinuxGold]

Very nicely written! Touched my heart into smithersteen!