Share with your creative poems....

Anactoria
by Sappho

Yes, Atthis, you may be sure

Even in Sardis
Anactoria will think often of us

of the life we shared here, when you seemed
the Goddess incarnate
to her and your singing pleased her best

Now among Lydian women she in her
turn stands first as the red-
fingered moon rising at sunset takes

precedence over stars around her;
her light spreads equally
on the salt sea and fields thick with bloom

Delicious dew pours down to freshen
roses, delicate thyme
and blossoming sweet clover; she wanders

aimlessly, thinking of gentle
Atthis, her heart hanging
heavy with longing in her little breast

She shouts aloud, Come! we know it;
thousand-eared night repeats that cry
across the sea shining between us

Sappho

i also like the works of Sappho -- for those that doesnt know -- she is a lesbian poet from 600 BCE (if i remmy right)
 
Originally posted by Freaky
"Sisters are forever"

Sisters are forever....
Remember how we would fight and always make up?
When we were young.. we always played "House",
we had dreams we would marry handsome men and have huge weddings,
we would wear Mama's dresses, wear her makeup,
sit on the corner of the bed,
talk about our futures.
Dream of our plans...
College, love, marriage, motherhood and most importantly of all,
We promised we would be "Sisters forever!"
Gosh, Sis, remember those amazing wild fights we had!!
We fought with each other, not because we hated each other,
But because we loved each other.
We would say "I hate you!" but only to love each other all over again!
We, sisters, would defend each other to the death when we had to.
We all grew up to be beautiful women together.
NotSoFreaky did all the firsts for us..
She did it to help guide me with my experience.
I experienced my firsts with NotSoFreaky's help,
In return, NotSoFreaky & I helped guide NotSoFreakyToo with her firsts.
We all wept on our wedding day, thinking when we were so little,
Talking about our wedding days in Mama's long dresses and her make-up.
We all were in one spirit when we all had our crisies because it was simply,
"Sisters are forever",
Together, with my sisters, I could not have accomplished so much.
I look up to my sisters as my role-models.
"Sisters are forever",
You have been with me in spirit, when I was in my dark times, for this, I think you eternally...
Sisters are forever and I could not have asked God for any better sisters than mine.
I love you very, very much NotSoFreaky & NotSoFreakyToo!!

Sisters are forever and irreplacable!! _\m/ Sis!!!


I enjoy reading your poem and it is awesome. I wish I have a sister. Dang. ;)
 
Originally posted by Fly Free
Anactoria
by Sappho

Yes, Atthis, you may be sure

Even in Sardis
Anactoria will think often of us

of the life we shared here, when you seemed
the Goddess incarnate
to her and your singing pleased her best

Now among Lydian women she in her
turn stands first as the red-
fingered moon rising at sunset takes

precedence over stars around her;
her light spreads equally
on the salt sea and fields thick with bloom

Delicious dew pours down to freshen
roses, delicate thyme
and blossoming sweet clover; she wanders

aimlessly, thinking of gentle
Atthis, her heart hanging
heavy with longing in her little breast

She shouts aloud, Come! we know it;
thousand-eared night repeats that cry
across the sea shining between us

Sappho

i also like the works of Sappho -- for those that doesnt know -- she is a lesbian poet from 600 BCE (if i remmy right)

Fasnicating poem!! It sounds like a romantic poem.

;) :naughty:
 
"black cottons"

inhaling black cottons
on the forsaken battlefield
standing alone raw emotions
under the solitary stars
watching your single hope wither
as it falls to dust
you chose to do this
you chose to let your world fall upon you
you are lost in the labyrinth of souls
somehow it's all about you.
one too many times have your steps faltered
one too many times have you fallen.
perhaps it was one times too many.
inhaling black cottons
you chose to liberate yourself amongst those black walls...
so let it be. i cannot
as you darkly fall through your shamed grace
i embrace your fall.
because we are who we are
your fall is my fall.
you chose to do this
you chose to let your world fall upon you
"you are my heart," you once said.
how could you let your heart shatter?
we were meant to self destruct
inhaling black cottons
i refuse to be crowned...
your glorious and infamous obsidian crown of shamed grace
dancing amongst the charred plains
we all create our own heavens and our own hells....

inhaling black cottons.

-heather-
-12.10.02-
 
Originally posted by LezArtist
Someone is very special in my whole blue heart...
I really mmiss her very much...
That already made my emotional die deeply into depression...
I cry every night before I sleep...
I cry every night during my sleep...
I cry everyday while I do anything to keep myself busy...
I tried to keep myself busy and not to cry...
Couldn't even stop couldn't even help at all...
My depression gained and starting to gain more, more, more, and more...
Started to draw down into a dark side...
Where I could even end up to cry until I die...
:cry: :tears: :cry:
I couldn't even stop crying 24/7
I need my special girl to be here with me...
To make me smile, cry on her shoulder, talk, express, and make my depress fade...
There's no luck...
Because I don't have her right here with me...

I cry continually...
My depression began to sink...
Sink, sink, sink deeply,
Into a small black home where no one could even find me...
I began to holler for help...
Nothing happened...
Kept on crying, crying, crying, and crying...
Kept getting down, down, down, and down...
Going all the way down into a small drain into a small black hole...
:cry: :tears: :cry:
I could not get out because no one will help me get out...
I really love my sweetheart all in my whole blue heart...
But...
She is very far away out of no where...
I could not even find her...
I want to walk to her if I could even find her...
I want to feel her if I could even find her...
I want to hug her if I could even find her...
I want to hold her if I could even find her...
But...
She is very far away out of no where that I couldn't even reach her...
:cuddle: :cuddle:
My depress starts to grow, grow, grow and grow stronger every day...
Even every night too...
I kept on crying, crying, crying, and crying....
Until my only true love comes back to me...
The one who I really love so much in my whole blue heart...
~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~*+~~~~~~
tell me what u think of this poem and why not add your own creative poems :) :cool:

wow, what a great poem.

it is really sad, but... wow.. what an amazing poem that you wrote.

It touched my heart. wow.
 
Re: Re: Share with your creative poems....

Originally posted by Smartiesgeek
wow, what a great poem.

it is really sad, but... wow.. what an amazing poem that you wrote.

It touched my heart. wow.

Thanks! :)
 
Lez~ I am not sure if it can be this kinds of poem but it sorta of song. It stuck in my head for longtime but I did write it down, too.

Let me say to you~ guys.

I was lying on the clement and face of the sun
I had my eyes closed
it feel HOT and starts to sweating
sweating tears running from my forehead to ears
during I am lying and my eyes still shut

Finally, I wipe the sweat in my ears and forehead
I sees in my close eyes, the shodow against the sun
I cant open my eyes, keep face of sun that
will melt my face.

my face feels wet and my eyes still shut tights
I tried to turn my head to right side
that will keep away sun that will melt my face
but I dont turn and still face of sun shne glow my face

stubborn sweat tears running from my forehead to my ears.
I keep wipe the sweat and see the shadow, too.
I finally turn my head to my right
I hardly open my eyes to keep away from sun that melt my face.

In few mintues, I awake and the sun disappears!
I look around during I lying the clement and wonders
sweating tears dries and my ears fill up the water
the shadow is disappear when I wipe the sweats.

It is soo chill and look at the sky.
here nothing sun that would not melt my FACE!

By Jenny

(It is rusty but I tried. :D)
 
Originally posted by MizzDeaf
Lez~ I am not sure if it can be this kinds of poem but it sorta of song. It stuck in my head for longtime but I did write it down, too.

Let me say to you~ guys.

I was lying on the clement and face of the sun
I had my eyes closed
it feel HOT and starts to sweating
sweating tears running from my forehead to ears
during I am lying and my eyes still shut

Finally, I wipe the sweat in my ears and forehead
I sees in my close eyes, the shodow against the sun
I cant open my eyes, keep face of sun that
will melt my face.

my face feels wet and my eyes still shut tights
I tried to turn my head to right side
that will keep away sun that will melt my face
but I dont turn and still face of sun shne glow my face

stubborn sweat tears running from my forehead to my ears.
I keep wipe the sweat and see the shadow, too.
I finally turn my head to my right
I hardly open my eyes to keep away from sun that melt my face.

In few mintues, I awake and the sun disappears!
I look around during I lying the clement and wonders
sweating tears dries and my ears fill up the water
the shadow is disappear when I wipe the sweats.

It is soo chill and look at the sky.
here nothing sun that would not melt my FACE!

By Jenny

(It is rusty but I tried. :D)

it's good peom that u wrote but but but u spelled one word wrong :rofl: u better not :slap: me i will go :scatter: that u can't catch me :laugh2: :rofl:
 
Originally posted by LezArtist
it's good peom that u wrote but but but u spelled one word wrong :rofl: u better not :slap: me i will go :scatter: that u can't catch me :laugh2: :rofl:

Thanks but I was at work and not attention PERFECT word to spell.... huh?? shessh!!!
 
Someone who is very special in my heart...
She made my heart shine...
She made my heart going on and on...
Haven't stopped yet...
She made my heart glow...
She made my heart heal from the pains...
She made my heart grow bigger...

Wondering who she is....
She is my AIKO...
She made me happy...
She made me laugh...
She made me cry in happiness...
She made me all comfortable...
She made me to realize to believe in me...
She made me to realize to trust in me...
She made me to realize that I am worth...
She made me to realize that I am special...
She made me to realize that I am not a loser...
She made me to realize what TRUE LOVE is..
She made me to realize that I am not alone...

She is my only AIKO...
That I could even love...
That I could even care abt...
That I could even talk to...
That I could even laugh with...
That I could even share anything with...
That I could even be open with...
That I could even show her my true love that she never felt before...
That I could even do anything for her...

I wondering if my AIKO would be mine...
I wondering if my AIKO would feel the same as I feel....
Aiko is very special in my only ONE heart!
 
Originally posted by Smartiesgeek
Wow, whos aiko?

Wow, it is a great poem. It touches my heart. wow, keep it up, lez!

ummm not gonna tell who is aiko hehehehe :nana: I am still writing more poems so will have them coming up :)
 
Originally posted by LezArtist
ummm not gonna tell who is aiko hehehehe :nana: I am still writing more poems so will have them coming up :)


AWW... :nana:

oh really, wonderful. keep it up, lez... WRITING writing writing.

KEEP YOUR HANDS exercise. :laugh2: :rofl:
 
Originally posted by LezArtist
Someone who is very special in my heart...
She made my heart shine...
She made my heart going on and on...
Haven't stopped yet...
She made my heart glow...
She made my heart heal from the pains...
She made my heart grow bigger...

Wondering who she is....
She is my AIKO...
She made me happy...
She made me laugh...
She made me cry in happiness...
She made me all comfortable...
She made me to realize to believe in me...
She made me to realize to trust in me...
She made me to realize that I am worth...
She made me to realize that I am special...
She made me to realize that I am not a loser...
She made me to realize what TRUE LOVE is..
She made me to realize that I am not alone...

She is my only AIKO...
That I could even love...
That I could even care abt...
That I could even talk to...
That I could even laugh with...
That I could even share anything with...
That I could even be open with...
That I could even show her my true love that she never felt before...
That I could even do anything for her...

I wondering if my AIKO would be mine...
I wondering if my AIKO would feel the same as I feel....
Aiko is very special in my only ONE heart!

LezArtist -- this poem of urs is SO bootiful!!!!!
 
Yeah, it is beautiful. wow.

It was coming from her heart.

I am very sure that we never will know who aiko is.

Aiko is full of mystery.
 
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