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Someone is very special in my whole blue heart...
I really mmiss her very much...
That already made my emotional die deeply into depression...
I cry every night before I sleep...
I cry every night during my sleep...
I cry everyday while I do anything to keep myself busy...
I tried to keep myself busy and not to cry...
Couldn't even stop couldn't even help at all...
My depression gained and starting to gain more, more, more, and more...
Started to draw down into a dark side...
Where I could even end up to cry until I die...
:cry: :tears: :cry:
I couldn't even stop crying 24/7
I need my special girl to be here with me...
To make me smile, cry on her shoulder, talk, express, and make my depress fade...
There's no luck...
Because I don't have her right here with me...

I cry continually...
My depression began to sink...
Sink, sink, sink deeply,
Into a small black home where no one could even find me...
I began to holler for help...
Nothing happened...
Kept on crying, crying, crying, and crying...
Kept getting down, down, down, and down...
Going all the way down into a small drain into a small black hole...
:cry: :tears: :cry:
I could not get out because no one will help me get out...
I really love my sweetheart all in my whole blue heart...
But...
She is very far away out of no where...
I could not even find her...
I want to walk to her if I could even find her...
I want to feel her if I could even find her...
I want to hug her if I could even find her...
I want to hold her if I could even find her...
But...
She is very far away out of no where that I couldn't even reach her...
:cuddle: :cuddle:
My depress starts to grow, grow, grow and grow stronger every day...
Even every night too...
I kept on crying, crying, crying, and crying....
Until my only true love comes back to me...
The one who I really love so much in my whole blue heart...
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tell me what u think of this poem and why not add your own creative poems :) :cool:
 
very nice but a sad poem LezArtist -- i would post a few of mine when i find my work -- just gotta find them again LOL
 
"Sisters are forever"

Sisters are forever....
Remember how we would fight and always make up?
When we were young.. we always played "House",
we had dreams we would marry handsome men and have huge weddings,
we would wear Mama's dresses, wear her makeup,
sit on the corner of the bed,
talk about our futures.
Dream of our plans...
College, love, marriage, motherhood and most importantly of all,
We promised we would be "Sisters forever!"
Gosh, Sis, remember those amazing wild fights we had!!
We fought with each other, not because we hated each other,
But because we loved each other.
We would say "I hate you!" but only to love each other all over again!
We, sisters, would defend each other to the death when we had to.
We all grew up to be beautiful women together.
NotSoFreaky did all the firsts for us..
She did it to help guide me with my experience.
I experienced my firsts with NotSoFreaky's help,
In return, NotSoFreaky & I helped guide NotSoFreakyToo with her firsts.
We all wept on our wedding day, thinking when we were so little,
Talking about our wedding days in Mama's long dresses and her make-up.
We all were in one spirit when we all had our crisies because it was simply,
"Sisters are forever",
Together, with my sisters, I could not have accomplished so much.
I look up to my sisters as my role-models.
"Sisters are forever",
You have been with me in spirit, when I was in my dark times, for this, I think you eternally...
Sisters are forever and I could not have asked God for any better sisters than mine.
I love you very, very much NotSoFreaky & NotSoFreakyToo!!

Sisters are forever and irreplacable!! _\m/ Sis!!!
 
Oh wow, that's so beautiful, Freaky! It sure sounds wonderful to have sisters (I don't have any sister, but a brother).
 
i did this back in 2000 altho it was in my head LONG before i got it written down -- i dont have a title for it but it reflects my battles with my life and to find the courage within to make it --

Drowning in the stormy seas in so much darkness
struggling to make it to the surface
I finally break free at the surface
and take a deep breath of air
look around myself --

I see the shore in the distance
I start swimming toward the shore
swimming against the currents and struggling
i keep trying and finally made it to shore

I then drag myself onto shore exhausted
but i feel somewhat free
looking out into the seas behind me
is the stormy sea and
I look in front of me I see the forest

I take halting but determinted steps forward
toward the forest
I KNOW there will be more struggles ahead but I look forward
I struggle through the darkness of the forest not knowing where I am going
but then i look ahead
I see a glimmer of light in front of me

I feel the peace taking over my soul --
I forge ahead determined to save myself
MIND, BODY and SOUL

I come to the edge of the forest awashed in the light
I smile feeling my mind, body and soul become free
from the bondages of evil and self destruction

I turn to take a final look behind me, satisified I've survived
the HARDEST battle
I turn to face the future ready to tackle whatever confronts me
walking forward into the light
the future, my destiny, my soul being at total peace with my mind

I have become one: me myself and I in mind, body and soul

I don't look back again and always prepared for crisises to come
 
thats a good poem fly real nice way to reflect on the battles. Good way to think of the battles and it's mind! Great writing! ;)
 
Originally posted by javapride
thats a good poem fly real nice way to reflect on the battles. Good way to think of the battles and it's mind! Great writing! ;)
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gracias Javapride -- its part of what my sig meant

:)
 
She mean SIG as signature...You see signature below, thats my signature...undy?
 
Originally posted by ~Heather~
She mean SIG as signature...You see signature below, thats my signature...undy?
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LOL heather -- she is aware of that already cuz i explained to her in IM :)
 
lol well It would be good idea if I post here tho because what if some of others dont undy what SIG mean in short for SIGNATURE lol :D
 
Originally posted by Fly Free
LOL heather -- she is aware of that already cuz i explained to her in IM :)
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Yep She sure did and thanks now i uddy more clearly can be such a dunce sometimes!
 
Peace



As I walk this earth,
I fear no man,
I’ve seen too much,
I’ve done what I can.

Peace and quite,
Is what I seek,
I search the earth,
Sometimes I weep.

I left home and friends,
I don’t look back,
I shall find myself,
I’ll get on track.

Some understand,
Some never will,
What drives me to do this,
What need I must fill.

I have the strength,
To search and find,
What I need so much,
Is peace of mind.



David
 
Originally posted by bbnt
Peace



As I walk this earth,
I fear no man,
I’ve seen too much,
I’ve done what I can.

Peace and quite,
Is what I seek,
I search the earth,
Sometimes I weep.

I left home and friends,
I don’t look back,
I shall find myself,
I’ll get on track.

Some understand,
Some never will,
What drives me to do this,
What need I must fill.

I have the strength,
To search and find,
What I need so much,
Is peace of mind.



David
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this is very beautiful! sounds very spiritual :)
 
FREE AT LAST


Shes been waiting for this day for most her life
To finally see her name called one last time.
With the tears rolling down her eyes
filling with the rejoice of hope
took her diploma with a smile on her face
she saw someone say

NOW Shes gonna go
where she never gone
she's gonna endevor
To where she's gonna go
To where her dreams comes true
She's free at last!

Five years down the road with her masters in hand
looking for a job she felt herself get down to.....
remembering the days of old wondering if shes gonna make it
thru......
She remembered her friend's words and found a job
before she blinked her eyes

And now shes gonna go to where shes never gone
shes gonna endeveor to where the dreams comes true
Shes Free At last

Walking down the asile in her wedding gown
Smiling like there was no tomorrow
She's gonna cuz she knows now
She's free at last
 
Originally posted by funnybebe78
stephy-

real good poem I ever read from u ;)
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gracias Purrs :) if i write more ill post them -- i have a few from 1993 but ahh not really want to post those -- im sure ill write a few more poems that are more recent :)
 
Nothing Gold Can Stay
by Robert Lee Frost

Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay

I have always liked this poem for as long as i can remember -- its beautiful!
 
I also like this one by this poet

"I Am Not Yours"
by Sarah Teasdale

I am not yours, not lost in you,
Not lost, although I long to be
Lost as a candle lit at noon,
Lost as a snowflake in the sea.

You love me, and I find you still
A spirit beautiful and bright,
Yet I am I, who long to be
Lost as a light is lost in light.

Oh plunge me deep in love -- put out
My senses, leave me deaf and blind,
Swept by the tempest of your love,
A taper in a rushing wind.

i will post 1 more by a different poet coming up :) and ill write a few of my own ofc and when i do finish writing a few of my own i will post them as well
 
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