Poem I wrote a LONG time ago.. warning, not for faint of hearted..

WildHunt

Member
and not for those who're religious and etc... just a small warning.


Anyway, I wrote this when I was about 15 or 16. This one was actually my "best" work at that age... right now, I cannot do jack sh*t.


anyway.. this is what I wrote:




Pits Of Hell
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Cast into the deepest flames
With no regrets, no remorse, no blames
No respect for those you hate
No love left, filled with torments and pain
Pure hatred and fury is all you gain
You wonder if you know you'll live again
Come back to drown your friends in their own blood
Send daggers deep into their hearts
Choke their scrawny little necks
Take in their moans of pain as pleasure
Sending chills up and down your blood-stained body
Their screams is your ecstasy, your fantasy, your dreams
Drink in all the gory, drink in all the glory
Taste their blood, drink it greedily, hungrily
Bask in it all, bathe in the fire, the blood
Their death is your climax, your orgasm
Sending them back to where you came from
Down in the deepest caverns of fire
Fire and molten blood
Cast them into the deepest pits of Hell
Listen to them scream their agony
Their anguished screams silenced as they fall
Into the heart of the fires
 

Roadrunner

New Member
Hmm....let's see...that was quite awhile ago...on the side of darkness and whatnots. Now, you can't write more........

!!Solution!! Write something that relates to 'love', to the things related to 'peaceful moods'...... :D


Otherwise, well noted and written by a female vampire-- :scatter:


Other than that...written eloquently, however dark it may be.... ;)








~RR
 

WildHunt

Member
Hmm....let's see...that was quite awhile ago...on the side of darkness and whatnots. Now, you can't write more........

!!Solution!! Write something that relates to 'love', to the things related to 'peaceful moods'...... :D


Otherwise, well noted and written by a female vampire-- :scatter:


Other than that...written eloquently, however dark it may be.... ;)








~RR

haha thanks! :ty: I was going through a dark period from 15 to 19 years of age.. blah. I'm still a little bit from that although not so morbid... :lol:

I don't write poetry or the likes of it because I don't really know what to write... I've lost my imagination and the ability to write like that.
 
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