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Stand there on the hill
Looking around of me
I only see are
Trees, flowers, sky
I feel the air wind up to my face
And I close my eyes
StBecause I see my man there
And I knew I cant live without him
If he is not in my life
Then my life would be empty
Once I decided to open my eyes
And see my man stand by me
I smile and look up into his beautiful, brown eyes
He smile back
Once we hug each other
Its amazing feeling
I cant let it go
Even I cant let him go
Hes mine
Everything is so peace
Wonderful!
My love for him is
WONDERFUL
When I stare in his eyes again
And knew that he is
MINE always
No matter what it isart smiling​

Its for my Seq. :giggle: I hope he love it. ;)

Please, dont copy this poem, thank you :applause: that poem is coming from my own heart for him. :D :thumb:
 
Hey honey....thank you for the beautiful poem you written for me! It made me smile! :D Keep it up with your beautiful poems...I love hearing it from you. :ily:
 
sequoias said:
Hey honey....thank you for the beautiful poem you written for me! It made me smile! :D Keep it up with your beautiful poems...I love hearing it from you. :ily:
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Your welcome! Im glad that it made you smile, I love to seeing you smile and being happy. I am going to keep it up with my beautiful poems ;) I will make more poems and post them in here or show you in private ;) :ily: :D
 
Sweetheart said:
Your welcome! Im glad that it made you smile, I love to seeing you smile and being happy. I am going to keep it up with my beautiful poems ;) I will make more poems and post them in here or show you in private ;) :ily: :D
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You're VERY welcome, hunnie. :ily:
 
Nice poem...

Maybe I should write a poem about food, that is the only
thing I am passionate about... ha ha.

Stand there in front of refrigerator
Looking around for food
I only see are
Milk, cheese, steak
I smell the onion and orange juice
And I think about what I'm going to eat
Because I am hungry!!!!
And I knew my stomach is growling
If I don't eat,
Then my stomach will be empty
Once I decided what to eat
And see a piece of fried chicken
I smile and put it out of the refrigerator
Put it in the microwave
To warm it up
With some broccoli and cheese
I can't wait to eat
Microwave beeping
I grab the food out and get a fork
Ahhh my mouth is so watery
Look so delicious!
Then I get a can of soda
DELICIOUS!
Then I sit down and smiling
And eat eat eat eat eat eat
and drink it allllll down
Now I am very happy. :)

Like that? :whistle:
 
Both two poems here are sweet. See everyone...there are no rule about writing a poem to express your feelings, see, or hear... even about food yum... You can write something stupid, sweet, loving, hateful, anything you want...SMILE!!!!

Nice job.
 
It's beautiful, Sweetheart. I kinow it touched your man's heart.
 
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