people of the week

[thunderlionman]

PEOPLE OF THE WEEK

I met a crying sadden man this week,
He was talking about his ex wife,
Marriage didn't work out as it was weak,
He decided to hang himself end his life...

I met a gothic nice woman later this week,
She was talking about her wrist was slit,
Curious about feeling thrill was to seek,
Flirting with her life and death litlle bit...

This week ...i met a peacher who i use to know,
Talking about how he got tired of people ,not improving,
The way they live in crimes or abusives whatever so,
All he wish them to get their life keep on moving !

Later this week, i watched the children playing in the street,
Tag along game near the time of the dark,
They were laughing , yelling and running with thier barefeet,
Heard the lurking danger man hide in the park !

I wonder what next someone i am gonna met,
May the negative sides drown in the lake,
Let the postive sides shine on when sunset ,
let me see the people enjoys for tier sake !!

paul meyerholz
sept 22-2004

 

[Malfoyish]

PEOPLE OF THE WEEK

I met a crying sadden man this week,
He was talking about his ex wife,
Marriage didn't work out as it was weak,
He decided to hang himself end his life...

I met a gothic nice woman later this week,
She was talking about her wrist was slit,
Curious about feeling thrill was to seek,
Flirting with her life and death litlle bit...

This week ...i met a peacher who i use to know,
Talking about how he got tired of people ,not improving,
The way they live in crimes or abusives whatever so,
All he wish them to get their life keep on moving !

Later this week, i watched the children playing in the street,
Tag along game near the time of the dark,
They were laughing , yelling and running with thier barefeet,
Heard the lurking danger man hide in the park !

I wonder what next someone i am gonna met,
May the negative sides drown in the lake,
Let the postive sides shine on when sunset ,
let me see the people enjoys for tier sake !!

paul meyerholz
sept 22-2004

That's good stuff. Did you know we have a Creative Writing folder?

Thanks for sharing. Keep at it, it's very good!

 

[Roadrunner]

That's good thunderlionman, did you write this up yourself? If so, it's good...keep up with it....