:: macabre ::

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Deaf258

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:: macabre ::

waking up one day, slowly
feeling naked to the world
stepping out of my home
during the chilling season
swaying leaves fall about
dancing in wide circles
dreaming breeze whispers
walking along the street
rumbling cars and trucks
rolling past lonely me
uncaring and smoggy
striding faster, windy
stopping to observe
spinning around, around
ignoring the sensations
blind little ol' me
crushing bones, snapping
flurring red and white
falling flat
dying

- philip © 2004
 
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Interesting poem there Deaf258! Reminds me of having to be umm...extra careful whenever I'm out in the street in the midst of daydreaming or spacing out! Well written.... :thumb:
 
Roadrunner said:
Interesting poem there Deaf258! Reminds me of having to be umm...extra careful whenever I'm out in the street in the midst of daydreaming or spacing out! Well written.... :thumb:
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thanks!
 
smile, my misinterpret since I live in ghetto area in hawaii... and this quote:

"All negative comes from a person's inability to sit still and be alone."
 
Roadrunner said:
Huh? Just wondering where you get this from or derive this from the above poetry? :confused: :cool:
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You said, "extra careful whenever I'm out in the street in the midst of daydreaming or spacing out!"
 
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