darkflare83
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"falling souls"
void opening up to the world of pure agony,
where were you when you heard my call?,
my soul s falling wailing in pain,
i know what you are thinking "if i help you what do i gain?"
lend me your hand lead me to the light when i fall,
and hold me near ,
while i weep,
my heart s scarred deep,
look in to my eyes and see my soul s sorrow,
dont cry my dear for i shall live to see tomorrow,
so many scarring, so many souls falling where are thy hands?......
the end
give me the feedback or write another poems if you wish hehehehehhe have fun dude and dudittes
oh and this poem s coprighted which means you copy youbleed simple as that you comrende?
void opening up to the world of pure agony,
where were you when you heard my call?,
my soul s falling wailing in pain,
i know what you are thinking "if i help you what do i gain?"
lend me your hand lead me to the light when i fall,
and hold me near ,
while i weep,
my heart s scarred deep,
look in to my eyes and see my soul s sorrow,
dont cry my dear for i shall live to see tomorrow,
so many scarring, so many souls falling where are thy hands?......
the end
give me the feedback or write another poems if you wish hehehehehhe have fun dude and dudittes
oh and this poem s coprighted which means you copy youbleed simple as that you comrende?
