Got any new line today?

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Just for fun. If you are writing a story, poem, letter or whatever...what your first line would it be today? Any new line you can think of?

Like for example when I came home and turned on my computer to get back to my writing, my first line today was like this:

...The nature of its existence about the afterlife of forsaken ghost mountain had included a judgement upon death with its assignments to either the good, or the evil...

The rule is that you cannot use two sentences in one line. It has to be one sentence.
 
Every morning I wakes up thinking of my favorite line:

Who I am is who I wanna be.
 

Hmm.. Good question. :) I think it was last time I remembered the sentence before I was about to type:

"Isha was struggled to carry her injuried sister up while she was trying to climb up on the rocky hill." - Ch. 3, Witch vs. Vampire

i don't really remember which was.. ^^;;

 
I did a little today. I went back to Chapter Three to do more editing...so I ended up typing this last line to change like this:

...It seem that he was writing something on the blackboard, the light emitting from the glowing figure illuminated the entire blackboard like moonlight reflecting off a lake, but there was something odd about the figure...
 
"The computer bleeped, informing the tall, dark haired 16 year old that he had received an Email from his freind Michelle."
 
Next line...

...It could appear motionless but still the glowing seemed to be moving or flickering if you will, more like not a glow, but a flame...
 
If I get to finish my artwork that I am currently working on. The first line for my artwork would be...That artwork have at least 3 or 4 lines to come with it...but due to the rule, here's one line.

"What am I supposed to use my power for?"
 
Next day - When I re-wrote and to edit my first chapter of Vampire vs Witch and the first sentence I started with, "One witch had a longer and wavy hair was a paler whitish-gold, bluish-silver eyes, and a slight pale peach skin."
 
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Next line:

...He could hear the screeching and tapping of a chalk against the blackboard as his eyes trying to adjust to read what was written in front of him...
 
My lastest novel...

...A tracter trailer was the only one on the interstate, as he tried to see what was front of him from his foggy windshield, the winterstorm had made it impossible to see where he was going...


this is what I am struggling to work on to a perfection. I will highlight it, and hit 'delete' because I am not happy with this line one bit. Well I tried. heh heh...
 
restless_heart said:
My lastest novel...

...A tracter trailer was the only one on the interstate, as he tried to see what was front of him from his foggy windshield, the winterstorm had made it impossible to see where he was going...


this is what I am struggling to work on to a perfection. I will highlight it, and hit 'delete' because I am not happy with this line one bit. Well I tried. heh heh...
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Well, actually I change and type like this instead,

...A tracter trailer was the only one driving through the worst interstate with unevenly icy pavement. The winterstorm made it so impossible to see out, as the truck driver tried to see where he was going from his foggy windshield: to his shock and horror, he saw a thick packed of ice in front of him, that he had to sneered to stop, but the truck skidded and went sideways...

So it is more than two lines and I cannot break the rule. :ugh3: It has to be complex sentence or complete sentence of one line. So it was my last lines recently. I will always change it until I am happy with it or leave at that. Not easy being a writer.
 
..."Damn, no one is answering their god damn phone and what the Hell am I gonna do in this brutal winterstorm like this!"...
 
I haven't written in few days so this was my last line to the guy I had agrument with about him refusing to pave my driveway, 'just because' my car was parked in the driveway and it was too late. I told him I have worked 9 days straight of Hell and I got called in to work today (of course it was my day off) and if he could give me five minutes that I will move my car. An argument had gone on, on, on and on...about the paper he dropped off yesterday that we must move our cars-and I said, "Yeah in the last minute and no one mentioned the time, blah, blah, blah...and he said that orange paint he had used on our drive were meant for paving, he used a tone that I hate, I told him it could be anything-not just for paving-that it could be water breakdown, or just about anything damn it... I was having a bad morning, so I got this bitching tone in a return. As he still refused, so I used the excat tone he had with me that he was hollering at me that I will have to wait next year...blah...blah...so my last line was in the following...

"ALRIGHT! Whatever...whatever, you can kiss my god damn ass...

You could see his eyeballs were about to popped out. I sweared and walked in the house and sweared at my brother, every sentence with f-k this and that...that the guy refused. I was not least surprised if my neighbors have heard me since they were rushing to move their cars as well-some standing and waiting, even that guy I had a misfit with...My windows were all opened, and my brother's room was just next to the driveway. I left my brother just like that and of course the guys were watching me because they have heard me loud and clear...*wink* I smiled for being a bitch. I spun my tires and sped away heading to work.
And guess what...my words have gotten into this guy (the words I took out to my brother-he always loved me for it.)...and the guy came back and started paving my driveway the first thing in a flash before he started anyone's else driveway...so I came home and passed the guy, he saw me then bow his head to the ground...I already knew our drive was paved bec my bro txt me at work...heh heh...Life is so good. You got to fight for your right.
 
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