A poem that I wrote today.

[WhisperHorse]

Do you love me?
Or, do you not?
You told me once,
But I forgot.
So tell me again,
And tell me how to feel love.
So, I can love you back.
Is love flowing like a river?
Or beautiful feeling like a deep blue sea?
Love do flows
And, love is a beautiful feeling
Always
And, forever.
Love is special one
To you and me
Something like love
That we couldn't touch
Or see
Like it's in the air
But,
We could feel love
It's a beautiful feeling
To all of us.​

I tried my best to write it since I wrote it today.

Just please don't copy it, thank you.

 

[TweetyBird]

wow u did good job!

 

[WhisperHorse]

Thanks, Tweetybird. =)

 

[DVDFreaker]

I'm impressed, I can't write poems, I suck

 

[WhisperHorse]

I'm impressed, I can't write poems, I suck

Thanks, but my teacher said that everybody can write poem. so you can.

 

[DVDFreaker]

Thanks, but my teacher said that everybody can write poem. so you can.

Not really because I am not creative at words

 

[WhisperHorse]

Not really because I am not creative at words

Oh aw.. Song and Poem are creative at words. So you can give it a try if you are interesting to but it's ok if you don't want to.

 

[sunflowergal]

It is beautiful poem.

 

[DVDFreaker]

Oh aw.. Song and Poem are creative at words. So you can give it a try if you are interesting to but it's ok if you don't want to.

I can try but it would suck but if it was a song then it wouldn't suck

 

[WhisperHorse]

Thanks, ArkieGal!

 

[WhisperHorse]

I can try but it would suck but if it was a song then it wouldn't suck

Aw, I guess your best at writing a song then. =)

 

[sequoias]

Wow, thats a beautiful poem you wrote for today.

 

[WhisperHorse]

Wow, thats a beautiful poem you wrote for today.

Thanks!

 

[sequoias]

You're welcome and

 

[DVDFreaker]

You're welcome and

You and Whisperhorse needs to get back together

 

[WhisperHorse]

You and Whisperhorse needs to get back together

Give me a big reason why.

But, he and I decided to be friends that's it. I apologize.

 

[DVDFreaker]

Give me a big reason why.

But, he and I decided to be friends that's it. I apologize.

Because you both make a cute couple That's cool you both are friends, better than ending on bad terms

 

[CrzyMeg]

I'm impressed, I can't write poems, I suck

I can!

 

[Jolie77]

That's a nice poem, WhisperHorse.

I can see you'll be able to write more down the road and to thrive as well.

 

[WhisperHorse]

That's a nice poem, WhisperHorse.

I can see you'll be able to write more down the road and to thrive as well.

Thanks!