A Fairy Tale...perhaps...

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Once Upon A Time There Lived A Princess. She Lived High Atop A Mountain In A Castle All Alone, For Alas, Her Prince Had Lost His Life In Battle, Just A Few Months Before. She Had Always Known There Was A "special" Someone Out In The Kingdom Waiting For Her..she Had Sensed It Even As A Child Playing..and Although There Was No Doubt She Loved Her Prince And He Loved Her..he Too Knew, He Never Held Her Whole Heart. He Told The Princess Should Anything Happen To Him, To Open Her Heart Again When She Found That "one" Who Had Been Searching For Her Their Entire Life..the Prince Loved The Princess That Much!!
Time Passed But Finally, On Day, The Princess Gained The Strength Of Self To Venture Out Of The Castle. She Walked Through The Beautiful Forest, Lush And Green And Fragrant That Surrounded The Castle Were She Lived Until She Came Upon A Large Flat Rock, Next To A Stream. It Has Been Heated Be The Morning Sun And She Climbed Upon It And Rested..leaning Back..face Tilted Up Towards That Same Warm Sun..as She Lay There She Heard Voices Of Men Coming Through The Woods Behind Her, But She Dare Not Move, Nor Look...she Was, After All, The Princess. As The Men Passed Through The Woods Behind Her She Heard A Voice That Sounded "familiar" To Her...and Although She Could Not Hear What The Men Were Saying..that One Voice Sent Chills Through Her..could It Be? Was This The "one" She Had Been Waiting For All Her Life??
She Let The Men Pass With Out Moving Or Even Opening Her Eyes, Hoping To Go Unnoticed. She Finally Exhaled Slowly When She Could No Longer Hear Them And Was Sure They Had Passed And Were Gone. She Gathered Herself, Sat Up And Turned Slowly...to See A Young Knight Standing There...looking Directly Into Her Eyes...smiling. When The Princess Finally Allowed Herself To Look Into The Eyes Of This Young Knight, She Knew Immediately He Was The "one" She Had Been Waiting For All Her Life. Without Speaking A Word The Princess And The Knight Stood There, Smiling At One Another, Each Knowing They Had Found The Other After Years Of
Feeling Incomplete And Aching For That Missing Piece Of Themselves.
They Spent The Next Months Meeting Secretly In That Forest, Surrounded By All Things Beautiful In Nature And The Princess Was Happy Again, At Last. One Day The Knight Told The Princess He Would Not Be Able To Meet Her The Next Day. He Had Been Called To Serve Another..but He Would Return, For Their Love Was True And Lasting. A Love That Even Time And Space Could Not Keep Their Hearts Apart....so...the Princess Made Her Way Back To The Castle And Watched And Waitied For Her Knight To Return To Her. She Went To The Highest Point Of The Castle And Watched Out Into The Forest, For Him To Return To Her..but Alas..tho She Waited..he Never Returned.
The Princess Was Broken Hearted And Sat In That Same Room, In The Tower Of Her Castle For Months. Then , Finally One Day, After He Had Been Gone For Such A Very Long Time..the Knight Returned. Calling Up To The Princess, He Somehow Seemed Different After Being Away For So Long But The Princess Smiled And Cryed And Thought... At Last, My Love Has Returned To Me And We Shall Live Happily Ever After.....but There Was No Smile From The Knight, In Fact He Told The Princess That He Could No Longer Profess His Love For Her And Turned Away From Her After She Had Supported His Family, In Secret While He Was Away Fighting His Battles. It Seemed As If The Knight Was Someone Else, Changed By Whatever He Had Seen And Whtever Had Happened To Him.
The Princess Thought, How Could This Be. For He Had Professed His Love For Her In Word And Deed Before He Left. She Tried To Remind Him Of All The Happy Times They Had Shared, But The Knight Told The Princess His Heart Had Changed And He Had Forgotten Those Times. He No Longer Loved Her...and Pulling Away Turned And Left.
The Princess Returned , Once Again, To Her Castle..went To The Highest Point, Where She Could Look Out And See The Stream And That Flat Rock She Had Sat Upon That First Day She Realized That Young Knight Was The "one" She Had Waited For All Her Life. Where
They Had Spent Many Happy Moments Together...and She Watched And Hoped And Waited..for The Knight To Remember Their Love, And Return To Her...
She Waits There Still...to This Very Day..alone..with A Heart That Had Once Been Loving And Strong, Trusting , Giving And Kind....now Broken And Betrayed. Now Each Night She Looks At The Stars And The Moon..and Without A Sound Speaks His Name, For She Knows She Has Been Changed Forever..

There Is No Moral To This Fairy Tale...and Now The Princess Thinks That Perhaps..it Was All Just A Dream...smile..it Makes It Easier For Her To Continue To Live Her Life Filled Once Again With Love And Kindness And Forgive That Brave Young Knight...if There Ever Really Was One...smile
 
How old where you when you wrote the story? Was it a school project?
 
Neat. I really like it. I found it intresting that there are captial letter in each word, not in every beginning of the sentene...how can you use captial letter on each word, just a couple without captial letter. That must be lot of work to do that heh heh...Good job!!! Every princess would love to buy a story like yours...
 
I would like to add, not every child do believe in Fairy Tales...depending on their lives...There are some that do, and some really don't. There are some childhood tradegies that they do stop believing in Fairy Tales... I was one of them...
 
Oceanblue7....smile..thank you for taking the time to read my story. Laughing..I wrote it
just last year. I am the "princess"..well sorta, with a twist. I am a published writer under retainer to Random House....this was a way for me to cleanse my spirit..i am a widow of 17 months. My "Prince" did die. There was a "knight" and I learned the lessson
of the scam.....smile...so..thanks again and i would love to be friends with you..would you mind?? MINX
 
Thank you restless heart..smile..for taking the time to read my story..If you haven't guessed..I am the "princess" with a twist added. I have been a widow for 17ths, so I did lose my "Prince"..and there was a "knight. Oh Yeah...and like you I stopped believing in Fairy Tales as a child. I write childrens books now for a living. My childhood was stolen from me, I think that's why I do. Smile..oh and the "knight" he tought me a new word.."scammer." I would like to be your friend, would you mind?? I'll leave it up to you...smiling..Peace to you..MINX
 
Thank you restless heart..smile..for taking the time to read my story..If you haven't guessed..I am the "princess" with a twist added. I have been a widow for 17ths, so I did lose my "Prince"..and there was a "knight. Oh Yeah...and like you I stopped believing in Fairy Tales as a child. I write childrens books now for a living. My childhood was stolen from me, I think that's why I do. Smile..oh and the "knight" he tought me a new word.."scammer." I would like to be your friend, would you mind?? I'll leave it up to you...smiling..Peace to you..MINX

I am sorry that you lost your prince. After reading it I truly do know what is like even if it is true or not. I lost a sister over 20 years ago. We had huge fantasies in fairy tales and all, it just shattered after she was gone. I begin to see reality than in dream or being a dreamer. You are a writer as well? I am planning to get my memoir out soon and I do write several unpublished novels. Good luck in your writing!!! Sometimes children and adults do get tired of Fairy tales and needs to see something new and different, even in the opposite. Everyone do have their own tradgies in any forms or patterns...this is life and life never stand still and do sucks at times...
 
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