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MORNING EYES [by Jerome F. Haug] This morning as I was starting to stir Through the door stealthily crept a ball of fur The ball of fur jumped up onto my bed She placed herself right close to my head That ball of fur, my loving cat Just stared at me and I stared right back She...

Thank you for your comments. Yes, I did write the poem. Jerry

FAREWELL [by Jerome F. Haug] Today my very heart was touched I saw the children of one loved so much Say their goodbyes in a special way To their father now gone and on his way For his family there is much to adjust For the family he loved so much His leaving created the biggest...

Feelings create one of the most important ingredients in a poem. You certainly captured and shared those. Well done!!!! Jerry

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Way before, the sudden drop The cold, blue, river, does not stop A silent surface, seen on top While deep below, the current is not Closer now, the water gathers The silent surface, begins to shatter The current below, starts to churn Boaters' and fishermen, it's time to turn...

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To date: This Lonely Man - will be published in the Canadian Hearing Society's, 'Spring Paper' which covers all of Canada. Oh Wondrous Night - was very well received at Gerry Fitzgerald's funeral. Also, many of my peers have given possitive feedback. However, since I am publishing on...

Large flakes falling, silently down Quickly covering all things around The sky, made invisible, with snow abound Planes appear briefly, as they search for the ground The wind directs its' invisible brush One side of the tree trunk, thick white Branches, full of fresh fallen snow Start...

Oh Wondrous Night, I stand looking into the sky Enchanting things, meet my eye Oh darkness of night, how you invite me To look real close, that I may see How night quietly, slips into the abyss Stars bursting brightly, a state of bliss The clouds, pure pink from the descending sun The...

Health, I think the story says alot!! Thank you for sharing with us!! Jerry

Health, thanks again!! Glad you like my writing. Jerry

Excellent poem!! Thanks for sharing!! Jerry