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07-28-2009, 01:51 PM
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Is this ASL translation on the right track?
Okay, I'm putting this out there for all of you to see. I just want to know if I'm on the right track with the ASL translation here...
Now, keep in mind the person who asked me to do this might be speaking the words as she signs them, so I have not done strict ASL grammar, but I've done more of a PSE. Also, I have changed a few of the words to find a sign that still fits. This is from the ending of the MJ song, "Will You Be There?". Thanks in advance... --------------- [the regular typing is the lyrics, the signs are in ALL CAPS] In Our Darkest Hour IN OUR VERY DARK HOUR In My Deepest Despair MY DEEP DESPAIR Will You Still Care? WILL YOU STILL CARE? Will You Be There? WILL YOU STAY? In My Trials IN MY DIFFICULT And My Tribulations AND TROUBLE Through Our Doubts THROUGH OUR DOUBTS And Frustrations AND FRUSTRATIONS In My Violence IN MY RAGE In My Turbulence MY CONFUSION Through My Fear THROUGH MY FEAR And My Confessions AND CONFESSIONS In My Anguish And My Pain IN MY SUFFER AND PAIN Through My Joy And My Sorrow THROUGH MY JOY AND SORROW In The Promise Of Another Tomorrow IN PROMISE OF EVERY DAY I'll Never Let You Part I NEVER LET YOU [DETACH] For You're Always In My Heart. YOU ALWAYS IN MY HEART ---------------------- Please be gentle... I'm still learning.  God Bless, Lauren |
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07-28-2009, 04:52 PM
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I've only known ASL for 4 years, but I noticed there were no replies. So why not! This is how I would do it... OUR DARK HOUR I/MY TRUE SAD YOU STILL/CONTINUE CARE? STAY YOU? MY PAIN HARD TIME OUR DOUBT FRUSTRATION MY ANGER MY CONFUSION MY FEAR MY CONFESSION EMOTION PHYSICAL PAIN (I would get rid of anguish just because it's pretty much the same as pain) MY HAPPY (shift positions) MY SAD PROMISE EVERYDAY or PROMISE ANOTHER DAY ALLOW (use connection sign and detach thumb and index fingers) NEVER (the negation usually goes at the end) FOREVER HEART IN (I would sign "in" over my heart) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's just my interpretation of it, of course. It can mean different things to different people. Hope this helped. Feel free to message me if you ever need anymore help! 
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07-28-2009, 05:46 PM
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No problem! Is anyone going to record this person signing? I'd love to see it.
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07-28-2009, 06:46 PM
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Thanks for your help! :O) God Bless, Lauren |
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