dreamchaser

I can't really name this. If you want to give it a try, I would appreciate it. Thanks so much.... Jeanie,, still chasin the dream for a better tomorrow for ALL!

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Matilda

"The Watering Grave" ??

shel90

"My Lost Soul"

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traciedowell

Here's my idea:

"Condemned"


Also I like Shelly's name too.

FYI: I loved your poem. It gave me chills.

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dreamchaser

Thanks guys, Will give it a day or two, and then we can all chose it. Great Ideas ALL.

dreamchaser

You guys all rock. In a few days we can look at all the possibilities. DId you like the Poem?

dreamchaser

Hey girl, thanks so much! This is fun to watch the ideas. I really was at a loss. I have never tried to write a dark poem before. In a day of two we can look at the suggestions and vote.l

Matilda

Yes, I loved the poem and Shel's topic is way better than mine.

BelleSorrisa

How about "Abyss of Life"?

I really liked the poem.

Chase

"Submerciless," because I like to combine words to make unique titles.

The best poetry is the brightest possible image in the fewest possible words. Although dispair poems aren't my favorite, this one's image sticks with me.

Just personal, but I favor rhyme over blank or free verse because I think it helps establish beat and memory.

DragonYoga

on the scribophile site I suggested "cesspool of life" because it was a recurring phrase throughout the poem.

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dreamchaser

Clever! Thanks,,, I am having fun seeing the different ideas... I hope everyone will return in a few days and we can all vote on it...

dreamchaser

I wrote this because I was seeing other dark poems and wondered it I could do it.

It can have many meanings, depending on how deep you want to think about it. People can get sucked into material success or addictions or sex & pedphilia, pornography or you name it, and they somehow lose themselves... Even if they are still living and breathing, their souls get hardened and they are dead to what use to make them human.

I hope this rhymed. I am posting a new one today, a little cynical,,, but from the heart. I have a real problem with people who lord themselves over others and use religion to make themselves feel superior, not to count how they use the average person for personal gain. It is called the Truths you tell.