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Dpl207

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i wrote this
THE ROSE

This rose in my flower garden.
So vibrant, so special, and untouched.
No flower can match the beauty

Not even a hundred flowers could compare.
For each day of my life that goes by
It grows ever so beautiful, more and more.

The smell, the texture just adds to the beauty.
This smell is so heavenly and peaceful,
This texture is like god’s fabric so fine,

And God blessed me with this flower,
This beautiful flower with all it’s wonder
This flower that was sent from god is… you.
You are my love, my rose from god
I love you with all my heart

for jcskittles when she was sick. write what you think
 
it's SO sweet that you did that !!!!!!!!!

( mods mind you move that to the creative writing section please thanks)
 
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