I take it you write poetry..

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I mean hasn't, in one time in their lives, written poetry?

Hit me with your best stanzas!
 
Lo, sure there are deaf people who are able to churn out poetic material.

Here's mine and the shortest one in the world:

Hired,
Fired.

Lol!
 
Your eyes sparkle like stars and see shooting stars across the sky after we had a gentle kiss. Look at the ocean and see how far it goes, so does our love. If our love is so sure, then our love is so pure. Like the roses are red, meaning our purity of love be in our bed.
 
Your eyes sparkle like stars and see shooting stars across the sky after we had a gentle kiss. Look at the ocean and see how far it goes, so does our love. If our love is so sure, then our love is so pure. Like the roses are red, meaning our purity of love be in our bed.
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Your eyes sparkle like stars-
and see shooting stars across the sky after we had a gentle kiss.
Look at the ocean and see how far it goes,
so does our love.
If our love is so sure,
then our love is so pure.
Like the roses are red,
meaning our purity of love be in our bed.​


:) How's that? Looks good and obviously written for who you love-- ;)



~RR
 
Roadrunner said:
Your eyes sparkle like stars-
and see shooting stars across the sky after we had a gentle kiss.
Look at the ocean and see how far it goes,
so does our love.
If our love is so sure,
then our love is so pure.
Like the roses are red,
meaning our purity of love be in our bed.​


:) How's that? Looks good and obviously written for who you love-- ;)



~RR
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That's a good outline, how you do that? That's what I like. Thanks, bro!! Hey, does that mean I still get a job at Hallmark Cards Co? LOL
 
Ha...you're asking the wrong guy here, I don't work at Hallmark Cards-- :D (but then again, it sure wouldn't hurt to submit a few of yours for them to consider? hmmm... :) )

It's easy to do, use the 'center' tabs, i.e.--
, also, structuring how your lines are to show up instead of centering the whole bit, meaning you'll have to break it down, line by line and then centering the whole bit. Hopefully that helps, if not....*beep* me again. :lol:




~RR​
 
Roadrunner said:
Ha...you're asking the wrong guy here, I don't work at Hallmark Cards-- :D (but then again, it sure wouldn't hurt to submit a few of yours for them to consider? hmmm... :) )

It's easy to do, use the 'center' tabs, i.e.--
, also, structuring how your lines are to show up instead of centering the whole bit, meaning you'll have to break it down, line by line and then centering the whole bit. Hopefully that helps, if not....*beep* me again. :lol:




~RR​
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OKIE DOKIE HOKIE MOKIE, THANKS BRO AS YOU ARE A PRO!! LOL​
 
I have always sucked at poetry. I can read and understand it but write it..nope.
 
Title named, "You"

"You"

You're my angel
Sent to dry my tears
To hold me close
Protect me from my fears
You're my silent prayer
I whispered every night
"Send me a good person to make things alright"
You're my reason to breath
To put the sparkle in my eyes
So lucky to have found you
Is what I've finally realized
You're my everything
My sun and ground
The only person I will truly love
I hope you stick around​
 
Title named, "Once Upon A Star"

Once Upon A Star

I gaze up at the sky each night
And find the brightest star
It's always waiting there for me
So close, but yet so far
The star winks in the evening sky
And reaches out to me
If magically appears each night
For all the world to see
I've wished upon ths special star
My whole life through, it seems
I've closed my eyes and made wish
Of hopes, plans and dreams
And then, one day I got my wish
For I finally met you
You are that someone who is special
Who's made all my dreams come true
So now whenever we're apart
I find that same brightest star
It makes me feel so close to you
No matter where you are​
 
Few poems more.

Complete

I met you
You complete my heart
You complete my soul
You complete my life
I love you so much
I'm glad that I found you
You are my precious love

Answer

If you're asking if I need you
The answer is forever
If you're asking if I'll leave you
The answer is NEVER
If you're asking me what I value
The answer is you
If you 're asking if I love you
The answer is I do

When

When I first saw you
I was afraid to met you
When I frist met you
I was afraid to kiss you
When I first kissed you
I was afraid to love you
But now I do love you
I'm afraid to lose you​
 
Last one... Title named "I love you"

I love you

I never really know you
You were just another friend
But when I got to know you
I let my heart unbend
I couldn't help past memories
That would only make me cry
I had to forget my first love
And give love another try
So I've fallen in love with you
And I'll never let you go
I love you more than anyone
And if you ever wonder why
I don't know what I'll say
But I'll never stop loving you
Each and every day
My feelings for you will never change
Just know my feelings are true
Just remember one thing
I Love You!​
 
For your Information:

PLEASE DON'T COPY ANY OF MY POEMS AT ALL.

It's coming from my heart that I wrote. So thank you.
 
Very nice poem there Sweetheart....obviously most of us here knows what this poem refers to 'now'.... ;)

Wtg.... :thumb:







~RR
 
Sweetheart said:
"You"

You're my angel
Sent to dry my tears
To hold me close
Protect me from my fears
You're my silent prayer
I whispered every night
"Send me a good person to make things alright"
You're my reason to breath
To put the sparkle in my eyes
So lucky to have found you
Is what I've finally realized
You're my everything
My sun and ground
The only person I will truly love
I hope you stick around​
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Aw beautiful poem, I like that one A LOT!! you're a pretty good poem writter, teach me someday so I can write one up for RR :giggle: ;)
 
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