Just wrote this one a few minutes ago...

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Kinda rough draft, maybe not.. *shrugs* so far I like it but I want something else, dunno just what it is yet.


Beautiful Dreamer
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O Child, Beautiful Dreamer
Come sit on my lap, come lay your head against my chest
Beautiful Dreamer, Beautiful Dreamer
Mold yourself against me, listen to my heartbeat
Beautiful Dreamer, Beautiful Dreamer
Embrace you and feel safe, no harm may come
Beautiful Dreamer, Beautiful Dreamer
Close those beautiful eyes, let your worries fade away
Beautiful Dreamer, Beautiful Dreamer
Dream of waterfalls, caverns and moons, dream of unicorns and fairies
Beautiful Dreamer, Beautiful Dreamer
Slow your breath, become enchanted
Beautiful Dreamer, Beautiful Dreamer
Know always I'm here for you, beautiful dreamer
Beautiful Dreamer, Beautiful Dreamer
My precious little daughter, sweet dreams
 
Embrace you and feel safe, no harm may come

seems a little off. its not in the same english grammar. actually that one is in broken english.
 
Yiffzer said:
Embrace you and feel safe, no harm may come

seems a little off. its not in the same english grammar. actually that one is in broken english.
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With poetry, perfect structural grammar isn't always implied, with what she stated...it's poetic. ;)





~RR
 
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