Dragging his feet, Strong slowly walked to the chip painted front door ,next to the window.
He pushed it open, his heart pounding. Was Davis still alive ?
And why was Robert Davis even here ?
Suddenly , inside the door, a woman's hand with manicured nails, grabbed his shoulder.
Detective Strong, feeling dazed, he knew he had to keep walking the short distance from his car to see more through the opened curtains of the old house.
He had to see for sure who it was slumped in the armchair.
It was Robert Davis !!
One of Detective Strong's informants.
*yes, l agree, when adding your sentences, post the last part of the story written, that way the reader can follow along.
( plus we will now start adding on l extra sentence every week, ie this week write 3 sentences, next week 4..etc etc. this will now make the story move forward faster. )
welcome. l'm losing my hearing too. My left hearing loss is through 2 ear ops but just found out my good right hearing loss is unexplained at the moment. She told me they need to find out why its happening as its going too fast. That test was 3 weeks ago but we can get them free in UK. Is there...
Keep adding 2 sentences each, once a day, to see where the story goes. Who knows, we just might have a best seller here :)
edit ; l was thinking today ,If it's any good we could send it off to publisher for vetting to see if it could be used for all the royalties to go to any deaf community...