Hi,
I was terrible at english and have never written a poem out of my own interest but I wrote this poem for my new gf. Still deciding whether to write it on the card with the rose etc. I am hoping you guys can tell me if it is any good or if it can be improved.
The theme is pretty obvious
Thanks =D
I was terrible at english and have never written a poem out of my own interest but I wrote this poem for my new gf. Still deciding whether to write it on the card with the rose etc. I am hoping you guys can tell me if it is any good or if it can be improved.
The theme is pretty obvious
Thanks =D
take my hand and come with me
where we are going, i don't need to see
just take my hand and walk with me.
As we depart
i will steal your heart
though do not fear
i will keep it near
you can't get lost, on this trail
nothing can fail,
in this tale
take my hand and come with me
where we are going i don't need to see
just take my hand and walk with me.
where we are going, i don't need to see
just take my hand and walk with me.
As we depart
i will steal your heart
though do not fear
i will keep it near
you can't get lost, on this trail
nothing can fail,
in this tale
take my hand and come with me
where we are going i don't need to see
just take my hand and walk with me.
