Old Maid poem

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I want to share a poem that my bf "starrygaze" James wrote for me.. he's wonderful at this as I have read several of his poems..

here's one I thought WOW that is a beautiful poem and I want to share that with yall.. :)

Tired of Old Maid

Real love of shadow hath arrived
Old maid search on
Lonely labor grows tiresome place
Tired of clean and mystery mess unmoved
Miserable feeling and unfound love no help

Being happy with her gift of boy from angel
Grow and play alone together without man
Being empty lonely needs fill of loves eternity
Time hath the presence of shadow

Prove of shadow in love
No delusion love has touch
Her cold faded into warmth
At last she is happy no more past

She is inside shadow of love
Kissing, massage, talking, quiet, happy, dance
No more old maid, she is more happy
Now together remains forever

-James R. 2005
 
Wow, beautifully written!

Do share more of his poetry with us, that is, if he's okay with it. :)
 
another poem for me from him..

Epic Loving at a Mighty Distance


Vibrant cloudless summer
plucks at gleaming green
grasses nodding lazily in
Earth's mindless breath.
Love's saga lives in this One.

Vast, vacant plains shimmer
beneath the heedless sun.
Arid breezes tickle my nose
hairs as I cling to you--absent
from me in your muggy, blur
of sweaty, rounded mountains
decked in deep emerald hues,
states away.

Love's anthem thrives in our two.
Destiny clamors for togetherness
in an epic love at a mighty distance;
our spirits answer to our love, forever.


James R. 2005
 
Up the mountain in bright stars
Shiny stars in our eyes
Lit the fire in woods
Smell the fire sparkles and feel warm

I lay me to sleep on your chest
Your warm comfort my head
Cuddle in tight and squeeze
My love dream comes true

My heart in sore many years
Smiles filled my harrow heart with your loves
Our kisses excite our bodies
Our happiness remain forever

Bury in blanket and play our bodies
Making noises we bear no hears
Breathes labor longer
Our loves are like fire sparkles


Hugs, James
2005







Zero Mystery


We, living spirits in mystery, our
minds have no power to explain. On
force flat, we're born in solids and the
dimensions of space are still an
enigma to us.

Zero, many dimensions with
infinite sizes and no weight,
contort planes into zero that
hold us around like a clock
of forces to consume, push, pull
float, danger, time, bend, and
disorder.

The miracle of mankind grips
our circled world, lonely, moves on.
Humanity believes God created us foul;
we are not alone in the dimensions.

Crack the puzzle of zero so
zero will propel us freely to
anywhere we fancy to travel.
No more rocket fuel, for our
Eagle journeys farther than our dreams.

By James R. July 3, 2005



HOpe yall enjoy read his works.. :)
 
Actually I don't written POEM but "not experience" when I was young and did wrote once poem at the school.

Your poem is insprire (sp) beautiful...
 
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