Demon Spirit: Chapter Two

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Evil Spirit
Written by SlyCougar05​

Chapter Two: Crazier Mother

Sam closed his eyes tightly when his mom’s car arrived to the taller hill, he was leaned in backward and to stay sitting on, soon, he could feel like a roller coaster was about to climb up. He whimpered, “Please… Stop.” For a while, Sam heard a horribly rumble from behind the red vehicle and he looked back at the other window and saw a flood was just now increasing and growing so larger. The giant flood destroyed many cities, vehicles, people, and creatures. The greenish-blue flood began to chase Sam and his mother, fortunately, his mom was continuing laughed insanely as she went so faster. The great flood almost hit the bug car and smashed in a desert hill in the half-way. Immediately, he shut his eyes tight while he turned to be seated. Sam screamed and appalled simultaneously as he heard a horrible slamming and smashed many things on a desert ground. His heart was so punched constantly. Sam shivered while he opened his eyes gradually. They were not in a water and they were still hang on the greater hill as it was still climbed up.

“Mom?” He whispered softly because he did not hear her laughing anymore. Sam moved his chin up slowly and to look in a mirror, he gasped softly. Her mom’s skin was so pale grayish-green, a lot of odd-blooding motion on a whole of her skin, a bleeding tears came out from her black-eyed, and her smile was so wrinkle. Her hair was smell terribly and so dried.

“Cave…Oh, cave! CAVE! CAVE!” She unearthly crackled her voice. Sam frightened and confused, “…Are you Mrs. Blackwoods?” She crackled annoyingly, “BLACKWOODS CAVE! BLACKWOODS CAVE! BLACKWOODS CAVE! Oh, my cave. Oh, my cave! Oooh… Ooh! Cave…” She laughed mindlessly while his mother shook her head viciously. He began to talk to himself, “I don’t understand. I don’t understand. What’s going on!?” His eyes was swollen with a full of water to almost have his cry, hesitantly, he determined that woman was NOT his real mother. It was something wrong with her head…

End of the Second Chapter.

Author's Note: I'll add a few last chapters later when I have a time. Read & review if you like to. :) I hope you enjoy my story. Heh. n_n
 
I love short stories. I wrote simpliar to that in 1999 (Suspense) so my mother suggested me to write a novel instead of just short stories. I started writing all summer and finished the whole novel-all fiction in all three novels, Part I, Part II, and III. (Each appox. 300 pages) Everyone loves it! So how do you do our own forum so I could show you sample of mine. Smile!!!
 
restless_heart said:
I love short stories. I wrote simpliar to that in 1999 (Suspense) so my mother suggested me to write a novel instead of just short stories. I started writing all summer and finished the whole novel-all fiction in all three novels, Part I, Part II, and III. (Each appox. 300 pages) Everyone loves it! So how do you do our own forum so I could show you sample of mine. Smile!!!
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yeah, me too. I do love short stories. :) Really?? I cant wait to read yours!! I'll look in when you update 'em.

Oh, you means "thread post" (look at the bond font)? If yes, then it's so easy. Just go to "Creative Writing" thread, and to find a button "new thread". Click it. Go to type it whatever you want to say. That's it. :D
 
Mann_K05 said:
yeah, me too. I do love short stories. :) Really?? I cant wait to read yours!! I'll look in when you update 'em.
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I will have to find my copies and transfer to my other computer since my notebook is out for repaired :Ohno: Hopefully I won't lose any data. Chapter One is pretty long thou. It is not a short story. It will start with prologue first.
 
Mann_K05 said:
Oh, you means "thread post" (look at the bond font)? If yes, then it's so easy. Just go to "Creative Writing" thread, and to find a button "new thread". Click it. Go to type it whatever you want to say. That's it. :D
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Thanks I will do that. I thought it was a 'next thread' thing (different thread beside creative writing), duh me!
 
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