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Author's Note: This is actually old story. I wrote it when I was in sixth grade but it was incomplete story, now I editted it and to re-write it a little more for improving my old story. I'm almost done with it. So, it's just interesting to read. Read & review if you really like it, please. Okay, here's my story. 
A street was a huge and there were a lot of running vehicles near a baseball field and a church daycare the pale yellow house. The sun was standing on a yellow house, the pinkish-orange clouds around the sharply yellowish-glow circle and the high sky was also a little dark bluish-teal but too yellowish-orange sky on a ground to notice. A mother carried her little girl to drop her off at the church, when the mother and her child entered in and the eyes of the young toddler spotted a technical o’clock said, “6:45pm.” She cooed.
The young adult woman raised her arms to get that toddler girl from her mother and chatting shortly, and then the blond mother gave a kiss to little child before she left. At outside, the mother in white leather coat found her son in his boredom, he stared at the baseball field and those kids were playing with a full of blasts. The brown-eyed mother was smiled, suddenly, she felt so unwell and had a difficult to breath, “Ahhh… That’s so weird. Am I sick?” She was shaking her head and forced herself to move toward her own red bug car. She opened the door to get in, buckled in, and to turn her car on. “Sam, we will go to Safeway Store for food. What do you want?” She asked.
“No, thanks. I’m not hungry.” He replied.
Meanwhile… At Safeway Store, the twelve-years-old boy was so bored and thinking, “I wish I could swim today instead of stupid chores.” For about ten minutes later, Sam finally could see his mom, oddly, he realized she bought only one thing was one packet of beers. He studied her face was a grayish-blue skin displayed, the eyes were full of blackness, and her motion was slowing and slowing. She was sure looked like a dead person but Sam wondered what’s wrong with her? The mother in her wrecked leather coat reached the red car, to open the door, and began to drive soon the speed was increased gradually. Sam asked if she was okay. Bizarrely, she said nothing and kept to drive all her way.
A hour passed, Sam found himself in a desert hill and he noticed his mom started to be drunk person that he was not pleasured with her action. “I don’t want to see you being drunken, mom. Please stop the driving before we will get hurt.” He spoke up to his mother, and she did not respond. He began to yell at her in the same sentences and she gave him no respond, again. He sighed angrily, “Mom, com’on.” She was still not speaking yet, and his mother kept to drink more beers, oddly, she supposed to be drunken driver but her driving was doing so well! He was absolutely confused at the first, he was not so sure if she was all right because he remembered her eyes were so black and her skin was so awful. Somehow, he abruptly wondered if it was NOT his mother? Sam worriedly scared, “Mom? Mom? Mom!?” He moved to her front seat and to poke at her cheek repeatedly as he gasped anxiously, unfortunately, she did not respond at all. He whimpered, “Mother?”
Suddenly, his mother stepped on the brake to speed up and to laugh uncontrollably and crazily as the brunette boy cried out. He frighteningly bellowed while he was trying to stop her speeding, “STOP! STOP! MOM! STOOOP!!!” He finally looked at the front window of his mom’s bug car and saw a taller hill like so far above the ground, it called, “Great Springfield Hill.” The scarlet car was about to reach there…
He gasped appallingly, “Oh, shit…”
End of the First Chapter
"Evil Spirit"
Written by SlyCougar05
Chapter One: Bizarre Mother
Written by SlyCougar05
Chapter One: Bizarre Mother
A street was a huge and there were a lot of running vehicles near a baseball field and a church daycare the pale yellow house. The sun was standing on a yellow house, the pinkish-orange clouds around the sharply yellowish-glow circle and the high sky was also a little dark bluish-teal but too yellowish-orange sky on a ground to notice. A mother carried her little girl to drop her off at the church, when the mother and her child entered in and the eyes of the young toddler spotted a technical o’clock said, “6:45pm.” She cooed.
The young adult woman raised her arms to get that toddler girl from her mother and chatting shortly, and then the blond mother gave a kiss to little child before she left. At outside, the mother in white leather coat found her son in his boredom, he stared at the baseball field and those kids were playing with a full of blasts. The brown-eyed mother was smiled, suddenly, she felt so unwell and had a difficult to breath, “Ahhh… That’s so weird. Am I sick?” She was shaking her head and forced herself to move toward her own red bug car. She opened the door to get in, buckled in, and to turn her car on. “Sam, we will go to Safeway Store for food. What do you want?” She asked.
“No, thanks. I’m not hungry.” He replied.
Meanwhile… At Safeway Store, the twelve-years-old boy was so bored and thinking, “I wish I could swim today instead of stupid chores.” For about ten minutes later, Sam finally could see his mom, oddly, he realized she bought only one thing was one packet of beers. He studied her face was a grayish-blue skin displayed, the eyes were full of blackness, and her motion was slowing and slowing. She was sure looked like a dead person but Sam wondered what’s wrong with her? The mother in her wrecked leather coat reached the red car, to open the door, and began to drive soon the speed was increased gradually. Sam asked if she was okay. Bizarrely, she said nothing and kept to drive all her way.
A hour passed, Sam found himself in a desert hill and he noticed his mom started to be drunk person that he was not pleasured with her action. “I don’t want to see you being drunken, mom. Please stop the driving before we will get hurt.” He spoke up to his mother, and she did not respond. He began to yell at her in the same sentences and she gave him no respond, again. He sighed angrily, “Mom, com’on.” She was still not speaking yet, and his mother kept to drink more beers, oddly, she supposed to be drunken driver but her driving was doing so well! He was absolutely confused at the first, he was not so sure if she was all right because he remembered her eyes were so black and her skin was so awful. Somehow, he abruptly wondered if it was NOT his mother? Sam worriedly scared, “Mom? Mom? Mom!?” He moved to her front seat and to poke at her cheek repeatedly as he gasped anxiously, unfortunately, she did not respond at all. He whimpered, “Mother?”
Suddenly, his mother stepped on the brake to speed up and to laugh uncontrollably and crazily as the brunette boy cried out. He frighteningly bellowed while he was trying to stop her speeding, “STOP! STOP! MOM! STOOOP!!!” He finally looked at the front window of his mom’s bug car and saw a taller hill like so far above the ground, it called, “Great Springfield Hill.” The scarlet car was about to reach there…
He gasped appallingly, “Oh, shit…”
End of the First Chapter