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WhisperHorse

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Im curious abt your opinion on my poems :giggle:

But there's always you...The one I count on
To give me the love and affection
I desperately need
And in those few moments
That we spend together
There is no one else
No one else I think of
No one else I desire...
And I know you feel the same
We love other people
Live our lives without eachother
Forced to imagine perfection
In these semi-meaningless relationships
Still, there's always you...
And everyday that I see you
We smile our little smiles
Knowing something in our hearts...
Something everyone else seems to see
But we never discuss
Because to lose what we have
Would be far worse
Than loving secretly
And no matter what happens
I know
There's always you


He's all mine With those beautiful eyes
That handsome smile
That sense of humor that made me fall
Too deep
Too soon
But he's all mine
With his amazing hands
They caress my body
They hold me so tight
My hand
My heart
And he's all mine
With that smile
That makes me melt
That makes me tremble
My body
My soul
All mine, no one can have him


I could live and love
I could fall and fail
I could strive and steal
And never know the real.
I could fall into
Your deep blueish green eyes
And fall back again
Into my heart's demise.
I could follow you to
The very end of the world
And never look back
And say goodbye to that guy.
I could speak forever
Or nothing at all
If I thought I could live
In love of your all.
Living a life
In hope and in pain
All for the chance
That you'll follow me again.
I know you love me
And your faith one day I'll meet
So until then you are
My love, my love, my heartbeat.


I once loved a man with strong arms
A big smile
And amazing compassion
He would hold me till i fell asleep
And kiss me awake...
I once loved a man
Who was "perfect" in everyway
Touched me so gently
Kissed me so sweetly
And held me when i cried...
I once loved a man
He always be there for me
He wont leave me
He will hold in me in his arms
FOREVER
I once loved man
Is
(a guy's name that I cant say)
Im so glad that he is mine
I love him
FOREVER
And
ALWAYS


Please leave your comment here ;) I love to know abt your comment :giggle:
 
Hey Sweety, I love your poem and it made my heart melt, yep that's for me. Now, you guys know who's my sweetheart. I love your poems and you're great at it, keep up your good work, sweety! :hug: :kiss:
 
sequoias said:
Hey Sweety, I love your poem and it made my heart melt, yep that's for me. Now, you guys know who's my sweetheart. I love your poems and you're great at it, keep up your good work, sweety! :hug: :kiss:

Hey honey, thank you. I am glad that it made your heart melt, I just wanted to show you how much I love you heh. Im glad that you love my poems heh, I wrote them last night :giggle: :hug: :kiss: Im keeping up my good work heh, thanks. Love you.
 
Sweetheart said:
Hey honey, thank you. I am glad that it made your heart melt, I just wanted to show you how much I love you heh. Im glad that you love my poems heh, I wrote them last night :giggle: :hug: :kiss: Im keeping up my good work heh, thanks. Love you.

You're very welcome and love you! :hug:
 
:applause:

Wow, look at their blossoming love!

Way to go, guys! Best of luck, guys! :thumb:

The poems are beautiful, Sweetheart! Mind if I use some of them for my beloved one? :giggle:
 
Meg said:
:applause:

Wow, look at their blossoming love!

Way to go, guys! Best of luck, guys! :thumb:

The poems are beautiful, Sweetheart! Mind if I use some of them for my beloved one? :giggle:

:giggle: Thanks, Meg.

Thank you. Aww, maybe ONE... Lol
 
Thanks, Meggie! :applause:

Meg said:
:applause:

Wow, look at their blossoming love!

Way to go, guys! Best of luck, guys! :thumb:

The poems are beautiful, Sweetheart! Mind if I use some of them for my beloved one? :giggle:
 
Very nice and definitely the 'words' flowing right out of your heart...and NOW we know just who that 'special person' is and wishes you both the very best life can give! Great writing and thanks for sharing this with Alldeaf!! :thumb:
 
:ty:, RR! :D

Roadrunner said:
Very nice and definitely the 'words' flowing right out of your heart...and NOW we know just who that 'special person' is and wishes you both the very best life can give! Great writing and thanks for sharing this with Alldeaf!! :thumb:
 
Roadrunner said:
Very nice and definitely the 'words' flowing right out of your heart...and NOW we know just who that 'special person' is and wishes you both the very best life can give! Great writing and thanks for sharing this with Alldeaf!! :thumb:

Aww thannks, Roadrunner :D
 
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