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The Creature
Author : Mann_K05
Created : March 2003
Author : Mann_K05
Created : March 2003
A red rose flew away to an unknown place.
Android forms have come alive.
Leaving behind an imprint of blood.
Life forms are disappearing.
There will change now.
One man - One animal -
He was the first born, a half man was named Luki Deville, a white creature tiger.
Scientists taught him to be mighty and brave to reach his goals.
Scientists helped him to be good gentleman, to understand well, and learning how to care for a family.
After a couple of months, young Luki was wanted to be himself and be free.
He was long-suffering, angry, and showing his own fear.
He could not remember his dearest thoughts or the first love he lost.
His memories were visceral coming through the violence and pain.
Soon the young half man realized those humans could be dangerous.
A red rose flew away to an unknown place.
Android forms have come alive.
Leaving behind an imprint of blood.
Life forms are disappearing.
There will change now.
For long a time, Dr. Rock was a scientist who created Luki the white tiger.
Dr. Rock dumped him in a cage room.
Before he left, Dr. Rock said, "Sorry. I have to delete you because my new creature will be in my life. You cannot be famous anymore."
Luki was so angry, betrayed, despaired, fussy, hungry, and so alone...
A beautiful red rose flowed away.
Doves flew away around everywhere.
A voice came from his heart.
It said to the half man, "Be brave, m'boy. Find a new life..."
His heart told him, "Dear, you don't have to worry. It's all right. Don't give up your hope."
An old stone wall made a slight noise to get Luki's attention.
Luki ejected out of the crackled hole of the aged wall.
He escaped freely!
But, he was all alone for many days, his tummy was started to cry and begged for food.
He was more tired and thought he would die soon.
He limped weakly to fall in a soft and beautiful red roses garden.
A dull storm came out, a dark storm was roaring, and a weeping storm made Luki so wet.
A strange noise, from a several bushes, was hissed his ears oddly to wake the tiger man up.
Luki followed the sound to find a truck, a little girl, and his father.
A brunette girl was inside the jeep truck.
A muscular hiker was carrying his woods to bring them into his jeep.
In a truck, a music told her an amazing story, Luki moved toward to listen a childish music, and the girl looked back at him.
Luki gasped softly.
The cute child was just smiled fearlessly.
"Come on, big tiger! Get in or get wet!" She waved.
Luki was so surprised, speechless, and was almost scared.
Amazingly, the little girl in a white robe made him to forget his fear!
A beautiful red rose flowed away.
Doves flew away around everywhere.
A voice came from his heart.
It said to the half man, "Be brave, m'boy. Your life will change..."
His heart told him, "Dear, you don't have to worry. It's all right. You should be happy to be alive."
Her father and she went to her place with the young half creature.
They fed him fully.
They left him to rest up all night.
Once night left, the day began to light up, and the sun popped out slowly to sing.
"O' my children, time to wake up! O' my dear, look at my glorious sky! O' my children, it's time to get up and go!" The strong voice of the sun was so bright and rang out by the vividly glowing of colorful sunrise.
The family ignored the too-bright sunrise but Luki had been wake up and to smell so fresh air.
It made him feel so good.
He walked over a prefect blue ocean for singing his own favorite song.
He hunted his food, to bake his food, and to come in their rooms to wake them up.
The hiker daddy and his girl was so excited to see Luki's face had been full recovery from his own pain.
A red rose flew away to an unknown place.
Creatures form had been come so alive.
Life forms were so different when their future began.
There will change now.
It was a wonderful afternoon!
The little family and the creature guy were grew up in a strong bond friendship.
Until... TV News told everyone about Luki but why Dr. Rock wanted him back?
The brown-haired girl told Luki that he must to leave and never return.
The sweet family had to take him to a foresty island where Luki could take care of himself.
The muscular father gave him a larger stack of food, some nice clothes, and a picture of his family.
The little girl gave him a kiss on his mere cheek.
Luki was so sad but he was willingly leaving without looking back.
A red rose flew away to an unknown place.
Creatures form had been come so alive.
Life forms were so different when their future began.
There will change now.
Luki the white tiger creature came in a new place, a deep jungle area.
He never had seen it before!
He loved to travel around his so-green island.
He finally met a stranger, the wolf-like woman, and was befriended with her.
She said, "Hello, welcome to Dewy Jungle! You must come with us, sir. Come on!
She brought him to see her friends.
He was so shocked to see so many human-like creatures.
He also saw
A greenish-blue lake...
A desert mountain...
Many den-like homes were everywhere else!
Luki knew he will have a wonderful life to live in.
A glorious red rose flowed away in the lake.
Doves flew away around everywhere else in a pure sunset sky.
The white tiger man watched over the colorful sky.
His voice began, "My dear sister, my dear father, I am so glad that you saved my life. I will always remember you. My dear family, I won my goal because I can live here forever. Thank you, Brunette."
The young half tiger man began to sing over the near sunless sky,
While the family, the father and the daughter, were singing together...
End.
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