read this pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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two purpose of this poem or song whatever you like to call it is one to show you all who i am and two because i want to show you what my thought and perception is k here goes,,

"lonely flames"

i m closing my eyes from the scars of lonliness,
i am tired of living in my own world i ve never felt so lonely before,
i feel like an flickering flame,
slowly being suffocated,
feeling only I to blame,
why am i being shunned?,
i have only warmth to give,
why do i feel other people s chill?,
i m tired of living in the days of old,
where memories haunts me so,
i may be lonely but i am the flame nevertheless,
only begun to survive,
i ve only wanted to illuminate the skies,
and pour down my tears,
why am i being ripped apart?,
yet i must stand strong against my fear,
i m only an lonely flame,
being reminded again and again.....


the end
copyright by darkflare83 original poem or song in december 12 2006 701 pm
 
here s other one

"echoing soul"

i care i understand i only know kindness,
my touch is like a feather and yet it can turn into claws,
betray me not and live you shall,
my eyes tells all letting my fate unfold,
my tears whispers secrets in echoes,
i ve only known whispers and an gentle touch,
my heart bleeds memories turns old,
time passes by things turns cold,
on an simple flash i m lifetime away,
to be or never to be choices exists,
my echoing soul sees all while my eyes re blind.....


the end
 
Good stuff man! That poem was really awesome, it WAS sad, but it always makes me feel better to write out how I feel, poetry is a great outlet... I don't know what it's like to be deaf and have many people look at you as "different" or to feel as if you are shunned on by the hearing world, but I'm sure it must feel horrible, people definitely need to be more educated on deaf culture, I've had friends ask if deaf people have to read braille... !!! That just shows how little people know about the deaf, but I am learning, and I love the deaf people I know, they are all great people, and I'm introducing my friends and teaching them to respect the deaf and all that they have and currently DO go through.

-The Rab :ily:
 
Great poems! U have talent..ever thought of publishing them?
 
wow they were really good. I like to write poetry but I havent done so in a long time. I'm not very good at it either.
 
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