Mother, am I?

lilredridinhood

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a fictional poem in soph year.

Mother, am I your secret?
Mother, am I the one you hide?
Grew up with only one hope
which was to make you proud, but.. nope
you kept glaring at me with that look
and complkain when i couldn't cook
am i not good enoguh for ou?
or does everything have to be all abt you?
my sisters have the time of their lives
while i have no life
do you know i cry myself to sleep at night?
or that i complete sucide at midnight?
no, you're too wraped uup in yourself
and in the mirror you're admiring yourself
too busy to notice i'm in pain
when you do, you say "no pain, no gain"
mother, am i a person like you?
mother, am i your daughet after all?
 
Deeply written with lots of heartfelt emotions stirring within--hmm...can't help looking at your avatar and this poem,the connection somehow, hoping this poem doesn't relate to you...anyhow, an another fine piece of work yet quite deep.... ;)
 
thanks :) and lol no, there's no connection, my moms a good mom :) and as for tht icon, pftt, I've had it since sometime last year :)
 
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