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ajmeek101

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Hi! Can someone see If I glossed these right? Please correct me if I didn't, thanks!

1. English:He'll crawl in, make himself comfortable and fluff the pillow a few times.
1. ASL: COMFORTABLE HIMSELF HE WILL MAKE, FEW TIME PILLOW HE WILL FLUFF.
2. English:You'll have to fix up a little box for him with a blanket and a pillow
2. ASL: LITTLE BOX YOU WILL HAVE WITH BLANKET AND PILLOW TO FIX.
3. English:When he's done, he'll probably want to take a nap.
3. ASL: WHEN HE IS DONE DO WHAT? (eyebrows down) NAP HE WILL WANT TO TAKE
4. English:He may even end up washing the floors as well!
4. ASL: FLOORS DO WHAT? (eyebrows down) HE MAY AS WELL WASH
5. English:He might get carried away and sweep every room in the house
5. ASL: EVERY ROOM IN THE HOUSE, HE GET CARRIED AWAY AND SWEEP.
6. English:When he's finished giving himself a trim, he'll want a broom to sweep it up.
6. ASL: WHEN HE FINISHED DO WHAT? (eyebrows down) TRIM HIMSELF GIVING, BROOM HE WILL WANT.
7. English:So he'll probably ask for a pair of nail scissors.
7. ASL: NAIL SCISSORS DO WHAT? (Eyebrows down) HE WILL ASK (direct)
8. English:When he looks in the mirror, he might notice his hair needs a trim
8. ASL: WHEN MIRROR DO WHAT? (Eyebrows down) HE LOOKS HIS HAIR DO WHAT? (Eyebrows down) NEEDS TRIM
9. English:Then he'll want to look in a mirror to make sure he doesn't have a milk mustache.
9. ASL: MIRROR DO WHAT? (Eyebrows down) HE WILL WANT TO LOOK MILK MUSTACHE HE NONE MAKE SURE


thank you so so much!!!!
 
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