aslteacher

here:
Sign Out Loud - Revolutionary Communications Device For Deaf And Hearing!


but don't buy, if you PM me if you're interested I can
give the program for free, I just need opinions on how
well the sales page is...

thanks

Deafness

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BelgianSheepDog

First of all, you did a good job for a first page :-)

Suggestions:
- split the page up into sections, with introduction information on the home page, ordering information on another page, etc.

example home page

header
navigation (links to ordering, more information, details, contact, etc.)

small screen introduction text
shot

footer
- add a company logo for the site header

- add a navigation section

- add a footer with contact information, update date, and other information

- more graphics

Put your formatting stuff in CSS, DON'T use tables for formatting!!! Validate your code. Some of the text overprints in FireFox.