I'm sooo impressed! My only wish is that you'd add more sensory info... like how she encounters the world...more details on scent, texture, brightness, sound description (whether muffled, clear, distorted...), and intuition--the things that add depth to the world of the deaf-blind. I can't wait to read more! Great writing!
A Deafblind girl is ready for you to read now. I've finished the first draft. All you have to do is read and tell me if you want to read another chapter. Please give me an email address where I can send you my first chapter.
Keep it up!
