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Old 06-23-2004, 10:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This Moment In Life

I used to think that happiness
was hidden in the waters.
It flowed unevenly, ungainfully, but
constantly.

After looking back, I realize,
I lost so much by waiting for
the water to dry up, instead of
reaching deep inside.
I remember that I had forgotten it all.
I forgot the water was my soul,
and that I should grasp
the happiness inside me.

When sadness overtook me,
I cried until I spilled
onto the sandy
banks.
When anger built inside me,
I was sure I would drown
everything from the torrents
I spewed.

But then I know
that all along, I was
wrong.
I realize now, that happiness
is deep inside me;
and you reminded me.

06.22.04

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I know it's been awhile since I posted a poem.. that's cause it has been awhile since I wrote one. They all suck, in any case. The meaning means more than the words, I can never seem to make them equal.
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Old 06-27-2004, 11:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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awwwww I haven't seen this Poem Yet. It is a real Good one you are really good at writting Poems

I love to sit here and read all of your poems. sometimes I would missed it only if I am either out of state or just not paying attention LOL.
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Old 07-01-2004, 07:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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beautiful poem there Pinkster!....I sure love poems, keep it going
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