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Old 04-16-2004, 04:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Things of the Past

I scorched through this forum to see if I ever posted my old poems- apparently I didn't so I thought i would post my old poems.

they were written when I was probably 14 or 15...three/four years ago so pardon the grammar errors if any and keep in the mind that I have grown since that phase so don't take my poems seriously. :-)

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Who needs a person?
Who needs love?
Who needs comfort?
Who needs security?
Who needs warmth?
Definitley not me.
Who needs loneliness?
Who needs darkness?
Who needs neject?
Who needs abuse?
I do.
(c) KMG 06.28.00
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Some guy you were.
Some gal I was.
We meet up after
Chaos,
Conflicts,
and riots.
Uncertain about each other.
Written in the Stars,
That we were not for each other.
I opened my mind for you.
You entered and habited there.
I got more attrached to you.
I opened up my legs for you.
You entered and fertialize there.
I got more care for you.
I opened up my last and precious treasure-
my heart for you.
And you entered and broke it.
Like the stars wrote-
We were not meant for each other.
(c) KMG 06.28.00
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Old 04-17-2004, 03:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I think - where the message is concerned - those poems you wrote are pretty sad, but true about how some of us think.

I think you also wrote them for me years ago, too! Great job!
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