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Old 06-22-2007, 05:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Standing Before the Sunrise

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Standing before the sunrise, I see
Thinking of you, feeling the waves breeze
Wishing you here by my side
Seeing the perfection of a reflection
As your lovin' face shone in the sun's ray
In ghostly haze
Steaming in the sky
As the heat of the sun shone through my soul
The feel of you in my fantasies
Wishing it real, but our memories were real
Lovin' you was my part for my life is worth
As I breathe
Every moment I think of you
I still do believe
Dreamin' about the lovin' that you do
Oh dear
Keeping you in my heart keeps me alive
And now you will be here to stay
Forever we belong in the name of true love
As the waves rumble through sand, we will never be apart
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Old 06-22-2007, 05:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Beautiful! Keep writing!
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Old 06-23-2007, 10:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 06-27-2007, 12:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Poem I wrote for my wife and daughters

MOTHER AND DAUGHTERS

Sweet miracles were given to a mother,

When least expected from God.

Out into the world they came,

One by One made two beautiful girls.

Their sweet scents increased in the atmosphere,

One by one made twice the blessings.

Their eyes were brown like father’s eyes,

But their smiles were like hers.

The oldest daughter’s hair was curly,

And the youngest daughter’s hair was wavy,

Like they were two different flowers

But their beauties were equal in God’s eyes.
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Old 06-27-2007, 04:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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MOTHER AND DAUGHTERS

Sweet miracles were given to a mother,

When least expected from God.

Out into the world they came,

One by One made two beautiful girls.

Their sweet scents increased in the atmosphere,

One by one made twice the blessings.

Their eyes were brown like father’s eyes,

But their smiles were like hers.

The oldest daughter’s hair was curly,

And the youngest daughter’s hair was wavy,

Like they were two different flowers

But their beauties were equal in God’s eyes.
It is very good, I really like it! How many poems have you written? Me over 36 so far, or maybe more buried somewhere...You can post your own forum on it with your poem so ppl will see it. Smile!!!
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Old 06-27-2007, 04:26 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Beautiful! Keep writing!
Thank you. I will.
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Old 06-27-2007, 04:31 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thank you. Any more dark poem? I enjoyed reading yours.
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