A Poem For My Love.

rabbit · 12-14-2006, 10:40 PM

If I could choose one person,
Only one, and nothing more,
To always have and always hold,
To cherish and adore,

If I could make one’s heart beat,
A little faster than before,
And fill them up with butterflies,
To earn an even score,

If I could love them equal,
-As they do I- and call a truce,
Always knowing, always careful,
Of their love not to abuse,

Lastly

If I could give one smile,
To any person that I’d choose,
Without a doubt you know- my love-
I’d do this all for you.

-The Rab

rabbit · 12-18-2006, 10:51 PM

nobody likes?

Roadrunner · 12-18-2006, 11:10 PM

Very nice and well written!

Undoubtly, you have good writing talent and keep it going too--

As for myself, I do write poems from time to time as well...nice to see a very good and constructive poem that's meaningful and expresses a genuine feeling as well.

Well done.

~RR

starrygaze · 12-19-2006, 12:00 PM

Your poem is very good I love it! Nothing wrong with your own creative words.

highlands · 12-19-2006, 03:15 PM

Impressive

***Jolie77*** · 12-19-2006, 03:50 PM

Nice Poem you got there, You have a way with the words. So simple but yet, so impactful and meaningful. Keep that in your agenda and you will be able to flourish into something wonderful!

I also love writing poems too. I think my poetry skills has somewhat declined but I've started getting back on that recently. It's kinda rusty but I'm getting there, I hope!

darkflare83 · 12-27-2006, 04:09 PM

yep yep artist to artist your e good man so smooth so rhythmic and its like an echoing fluid you could keep on staring on it

Angel · 12-27-2006, 05:04 PM

Wow very lovely poem you written for your gf, that would have been a nice Christmas gift

shel90 · 12-27-2006, 09:38 PM

I admire people who can write poems. I have tried but I just dont know how to make it look fluid and in sync.

Beautiful poem! Your love's heart must have melted?

Cheri · 12-27-2006, 09:53 PM

I love it man!

I admire poems so much and even the ones I get from my boyfriend, he's really romancing, he just melts my heart. I'm most certain your girlfriend has her heart melts too with every poem you've written to her, expressing your love is always a good way of showing how much you truly love someone.

DeafMonkey · 12-27-2006, 10:10 PM

Good Poem

.. I wish I could learn from poem in one day lol

HiBluE01 · 12-27-2006, 10:46 PM

Your poem is very impressive to me, rabbit.

rabbit · 12-31-2006, 09:37 PM

Thank you all for the great complements!

Quote:

Originally Posted by shel90

Beautiful poem! Your love's heart must have melted?

It certainly did

-The Rab

wildzerica06 · 01-01-2007, 01:35 PM

it's good poem.. your girlfriend should be lucky girl to have u

Freaky Cat · 01-02-2007, 04:14 PM

Nice Poem, Rab

I love to write poems but i havent done that in long time. I should write again.

12-14-2006, 10:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
rabbit Esoteric Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Massachusetts. Posts: 565	A Poem For My Love. If I could choose one person, Only one, and nothing more, To always have and always hold, To cherish and adore, If I could make one’s heart beat, A little faster than before, And fill them up with butterflies, To earn an even score, If I could love them equal, -As they do I- and call a truce, Always knowing, always careful, Of their love not to abuse, Lastly If I could give one smile, To any person that I’d choose, Without a doubt you know- my love- I’d do this all for you. -The Rab __________________ An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind.

12-18-2006, 10:51 PM	#2 (permalink)
rabbit Esoteric Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Massachusetts. Posts: 565	nobody likes? __________________ An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind.

12-19-2006, 12:00 PM	#4 (permalink)
starrygaze Sundog Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Shinar (Sumer) Posts: 2,320	Your poem is very good I love it! Nothing wrong with your own creative words. __________________

12-19-2006, 03:15 PM	#5 (permalink)
highlands In Love & Happy Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: in an inland city Posts: 4,168	Impressive __________________

12-19-2006, 03:50 PM	#6 (permalink)
*Jolie77* Love all, trust a few. Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Kentucky, USA (The Bluegrass State) Posts: 5,330	Nice Poem you got there, You have a way with the words. So simple but yet, so impactful and meaningful. Keep that in your agenda and you will be able to flourish into something wonderful! I also love writing poems too. I think my poetry skills has somewhat declined but I've started getting back on that recently. It's kinda rusty but I'm getting there, I hope! __________________

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12-18-2006, 11:10 PM	#3 (permalink)
Roadrunner Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Ohio Posts: 7,090	Very nice and well written! Undoubtly, you have good writing talent and keep it going too-- As for myself, I do write poems from time to time as well...nice to see a very good and constructive poem that's meaningful and expresses a genuine feeling as well. Well done. ~RR

12-27-2006, 04:09 PM	#7 (permalink)
darkflare83 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: milwaukee state of wisconsin Posts: 646	yep yep artist to artist your e good man so smooth so rhythmic and its like an echoing fluid you could keep on staring on it __________________

12-27-2006, 05:04 PM	#8 (permalink)
Angel ♥"Concrete Angel"♥ Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 19,088	Wow very lovely poem you written for your gf, that would have been a nice Christmas gift __________________ "When we do the best we can, we never know what miracle is brought in our life, OR in the life of another." ~ Helen Keller

12-27-2006, 09:38 PM	#9 (permalink)
shel90 Sun Whorshipper Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: A Desert Rat that has found herself in Maryland Posts: 15,918 Blog Entries: 1	I admire people who can write poems. I have tried but I just dont know how to make it look fluid and in sync. Beautiful poem! Your love's heart must have melted? __________________ ~Shel~ "A child educated only at school is an uneducated child." -George Santayana

12-27-2006, 09:53 PM	#10 (permalink)
Cheri Premium Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Ohio Posts: 20,773	I love it man! I admire poems so much and even the ones I get from my boyfriend, he's really romancing, he just melts my heart. I'm most certain your girlfriend has her heart melts too with every poem you've written to her, expressing your love is always a good way of showing how much you truly love someone. __________________

12-27-2006, 10:10 PM	#11 (permalink)
DeafMonkey SUN/MOON Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 9,561	Good Poem .. I wish I could learn from poem in one day lol

12-27-2006, 10:46 PM	#12 (permalink)
HiBluE01 Kristy's life in Hawaii! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Hawaii Posts: 2,493	Your poem is very impressive to me, rabbit. __________________ HiBluE01

01-01-2007, 01:35 PM	#14 (permalink)
wildzerica06 -Erica- Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: california Posts: 4,156 Blog Entries: 2	it's good poem.. your girlfriend should be lucky girl to have u

01-02-2007, 04:14 PM	#15 (permalink)
Freaky Cat My cat Oreo :) Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: ArKaNsAs Posts: 10,181	Nice Poem, Rab I love to write poems but i havent done that in long time. I should write again.

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