Catch my heart

racheleggert · 12-14-2006, 08:29 PM

I am very loner somewhere...
One Day a sweet gentleman decide to see beyond my looks, and see the inside of myself.
He falls in love for no matter who I am.
He has found me, and said I am very perfect lady for him.
He doesn't judge who I am, and love me no matter what.
He is very understanding, very patient and always look at a woman who he is trusting to be with for rest of his life.
Anyone could fall in love via internet or in real life.
God has bought us together, and we fall in love for who we are.

What do you think? I am very bad at poems. I am trying my best.

DeafMommy0407 · 12-14-2006, 09:36 PM

Wow such a beautiful poem. That sounds like my boyfriend and me. You are very good. You are not bad at poems. Beautiful words.

moonflower · 12-14-2006, 11:21 PM

sound like my man and me too lol

rabbit · 12-14-2006, 11:28 PM

Poems don't have to rhyme perfectly, it's what they mean that is important... this poem means alot, because it's what everyone really wants.

(BTW, It sounds like my girl and I also! hehe)

12-14-2006, 08:29 PM	#1 (permalink)
racheleggert Chode! Chode! Chode! Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Twin Cities, MN Posts: 2,219	Catch my heart I am very loner somewhere... One Day a sweet gentleman decide to see beyond my looks, and see the inside of myself. He falls in love for no matter who I am. He has found me, and said I am very perfect lady for him. He doesn't judge who I am, and love me no matter what. He is very understanding, very patient and always look at a woman who he is trusting to be with for rest of his life. Anyone could fall in love via internet or in real life. God has bought us together, and we fall in love for who we are. What do you think? I am very bad at poems. I am trying my best. __________________ PROUD BARACK OBAMA SUPPORTER!

12-14-2006, 11:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
moonflower crazy 3 weeks of my life Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: in my room Posts: 4,816	sound like my man and me too lol __________________ my little niece born 11/1/08

12-14-2006, 11:28 PM	#4 (permalink)
rabbit Esoteric Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Massachusetts. Posts: 565	Poems don't have to rhyme perfectly, it's what they mean that is important... this poem means alot, because it's what everyone really wants. (BTW, It sounds like my girl and I also! hehe) __________________ An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind.

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12-14-2006, 09:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
DeafMommy0407 Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 2,659	Wow such a beautiful poem. That sounds like my boyfriend and me. You are very good. You are not bad at poems. Beautiful words.