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Old 12-01-2005, 12:05 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Pls read it, tell me what you do think

Stand there on the hill
Looking around of me
I only see are
Trees, flowers, sky
I feel the air wind up to my face
And I close my eyes
StBecause I see my man there
And I knew I cant live without him
If he is not in my life
Then my life would be empty
Once I decided to open my eyes
And see my man stand by me
I smile and look up into his beautiful, brown eyes
He smile back
Once we hug each other
Its amazing feeling
I cant let it go
Even I cant let him go
Hes mine
Everything is so peace
Wonderful!
My love for him is
WONDERFUL
When I stare in his eyes again
And knew that he is
MINE always
No matter what it isart smiling


Its for my Seq. I hope he love it.

Please, dont copy this poem, thank you that poem is coming from my own heart for him.
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:18 AM   #2 (permalink)
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That's sooo sweet! that's a nice poem you got there!
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:21 AM   #3 (permalink)
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It is a nice poem you have written down for Seq
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:30 AM   #4 (permalink)
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That's sooo sweet! that's a nice poem you got there!
Thank you, RebelGirl!
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:32 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hey honey....thank you for the beautiful poem you written for me! It made me smile! Keep it up with your beautiful poems...I love hearing it from you.
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:34 AM   #6 (permalink)
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It is a nice poem you have written down for Seq
Thank you, BlueBeutterfly!
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:35 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Hey honey....thank you for the beautiful poem you written for me! It made me smile! Keep it up with your beautiful poems...I love hearing it from you.
Your welcome! Im glad that it made you smile, I love to seeing you smile and being happy. I am going to keep it up with my beautiful poems I will make more poems and post them in here or show you in private
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:38 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Your welcome! Im glad that it made you smile, I love to seeing you smile and being happy. I am going to keep it up with my beautiful poems I will make more poems and post them in here or show you in private
You're VERY welcome, hunnie.
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Old 12-01-2005, 12:42 AM   #9 (permalink)
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You're VERY welcome, hunnie.
Im VERY glad that you love that poem
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Old 12-01-2005, 01:05 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Nice poem...

Maybe I should write a poem about food, that is the only
thing I am passionate about... ha ha.

Stand there in front of refrigerator
Looking around for food
I only see are
Milk, cheese, steak
I smell the onion and orange juice
And I think about what I'm going to eat
Because I am hungry!!!!
And I knew my stomach is growling
If I don't eat,
Then my stomach will be empty
Once I decided what to eat
And see a piece of fried chicken
I smile and put it out of the refrigerator
Put it in the microwave
To warm it up
With some broccoli and cheese
I can't wait to eat
Microwave beeping
I grab the food out and get a fork
Ahhh my mouth is so watery
Look so delicious!
Then I get a can of soda
DELICIOUS!
Then I sit down and smiling
And eat eat eat eat eat eat
and drink it allllll down
Now I am very happy.

Like that?
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Old 12-01-2005, 01:36 AM   #11 (permalink)
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aww that sweet of u sweetheart!!!!
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Old 12-01-2005, 01:42 AM   #12 (permalink)
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aww that sweet of u sweetheart!!!!
Aw thank you, TweetyBird!
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Old 08-10-2007, 12:34 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Darn! You got someone with brown eyes! I am sucker for brown eyes.
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Old 08-15-2007, 10:47 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Both two poems here are sweet. See everyone...there are no rule about writing a poem to express your feelings, see, or hear... even about food yum... You can write something stupid, sweet, loving, hateful, anything you want...SMILE!!!!

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Old 08-21-2007, 07:38 PM   #15 (permalink)
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super sweet!
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Old 08-21-2007, 09:33 PM   #16 (permalink)
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It's beautiful, Sweetheart. I kinow it touched your man's heart.
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Old 08-21-2007, 09:51 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Nice Poems
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