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Unread 08-07-2011, 06:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hear With My Eyes

Please stop shouting, I just can't take it
Don't get angry, My heart aches inside
You say I'm not listening
But your the one that's blind.
You see, I just hear
With my eyes

This is my way of feeling
This is my way of believing
How I try, listen inside
Open your sight
I hear with my eyes

I don't understand sounds like you
It's just too hard to listen
Cover you mouth and speak
This is what I hear
Its just not clear

This is my way of feeling
This is my way of believing
How I try, listen inside
Open your sight
I hear with my eyes

Don't cry for me
I'm not the toy that's broken
Maybe one day you'll see
What both worlds are like
To hear with your ears
and eyes
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Unread 08-07-2011, 07:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Lovely. Did you write it?
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Unread 08-07-2011, 08:03 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Lovely! That's not so bad.
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Unread 08-08-2011, 03:28 AM   #4 (permalink)
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yes I did, last min writing lol

And thanks! I'm not completely satisfied with it though. May go back and edit it but thats what I do sometimes. I get inspired and I have to write right away before I forget what my idea was.
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Unread 08-08-2011, 11:21 AM   #5 (permalink)
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for sharing that, Lady, I really liked it.
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Unread 08-08-2011, 11:41 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I like it and dont give up .. keep writing!
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Unread 08-08-2011, 12:02 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I should get my poems known somehow.... just don't know how lol. Glad you guys enjoyed it I'll prolly be writing more related on the subject.
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Unread 08-16-2011, 03:09 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I love poem awesome impressive!
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Unread 08-16-2011, 03:41 PM   #9 (permalink)
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That is very good!
I made some phone calls to try and get more shows to have CC. And I told the people I was speaking to go home sometime and put on your TV and mute the sound then turn on the CC and try watching TV for awhile!
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Great words, i like it! That's what I feels, too, sometimes.
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Beautiful!
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But your the one that's blind.....should be....But you're the one that's blind. The word " your" means something that belongs to. Your book. Your shoes are brown. But when you are meaning the contraction "you are" it is spelled "you're". ...But "you are " the one that is blind....But "you're" the one that's blind. Other than this....awesome job.
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