WORMS OF HOPE : A Dedication

Hasnalogy · 05-31-2010, 01:14 AM

Greetings to All

Im still new to alldeaf and tryign to get a feel of how things go around here.

This a poem that I wrote some time before and I wanted to share it here. It's dedicated to all of those who desire to be more and to do more but just have to give their own selves the chance. We are our only obstacles and this goes for all people for all of us are faced with challenges.

Let me know what came to your mind as you read it. All comments and constructive critcism are welcome.

* smile*

Hasna'

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WORMS OF HOPE

How sad is certainty

And uncertainty.

They are so interchangeable.

I may be certain only that I am not

And I may be uncertain as to my certainty.

IS that how worms feel?

Uncertain.

Certain.

So sure that they are wormy and slimy and cold.

and yet

simultaneously

Uncertain if they will be anything much better than

a blind creature who breathes in the darkness of dirt

lives in the darkness of dirt..

Eats the darkness of dirt..

And puts out

Dirt.

You wonder at my words and I say…

For get my temporary insanity...

As it IS only temporary

but for a few

sentences

A few careless lines

a few

brief

moments

in the space of vast time and then

senseless ness will morph s l o w l y into sense
Like a strange
grubby caterpillar
changing his clothes while in his closet chrysalis to become...

to become...

a Butterfly.

For some reason we do not relate to worms.

They do not symbolize something that we all hold on to...

HOPE .

They are too strange,
too alien,
too grounded in their limitations.

We only appreciate worms of a more colorful type.

Caterpillars...

for once they emerge with colorful wings

Bravely,

gaily fluttering in the breeze

They catch our eyes

and our hearts.

They are without fault

They do no wrong..

We forget……… they were only grubby little worms once

bestowed with a chance ,

blessed with an opportunity

to be light

To be breathtaking…

To be truly

truly

BEAUTIFUL.

Hasnalogy · 06-03-2010, 01:57 AM

Hey everyone I was just checking in..

60 Views of my poem but not ONE COMMENT

come on yall !

Macian · 06-05-2010, 07:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hasnalogy

Hey everyone I was just checking in..

60 Views of my poem but not ONE COMMENT

come on yall !

very weird, thats all i can say

05-31-2010, 01:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
Hasnalogy Registered User Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 10	WORMS OF HOPE : A Dedication Greetings to All Im still new to alldeaf and tryign to get a feel of how things go around here. This a poem that I wrote some time before and I wanted to share it here. It's dedicated to all of those who desire to be more and to do more but just have to give their own selves the chance. We are our only obstacles and this goes for all people for all of us are faced with challenges. Let me know what came to your mind as you read it. All comments and constructive critcism are welcome. * smile* Hasna' ===================== WORMS OF HOPE How sad is certainty And uncertainty. They are so interchangeable. I may be certain only that I am not And I may be uncertain as to my certainty. IS that how worms feel? Uncertain. Certain. So sure that they are wormy and slimy and cold. and yet simultaneously Uncertain if they will be anything much better than a blind creature who breathes in the darkness of dirt lives in the darkness of dirt.. Eats the darkness of dirt.. And puts out Dirt. You wonder at my words and I say… For get my temporary insanity... As it IS only temporary but for a few sentences A few careless lines a few brief moments in the space of vast time and then senseless ness will morph s l o w l y into sense Like a strange grubby caterpillar changing his clothes while in his closet chrysalis to become... to become... a Butterfly. For some reason we do not relate to worms. They do not symbolize something that we all hold on to... HOPE . They are too strange, too alien, too grounded in their limitations. We only appreciate worms of a more colorful type. Caterpillars... for once they emerge with colorful wings Bravely, gaily fluttering in the breeze They catch our eyes and our hearts. They are without fault They do no wrong.. We forget……… they were only grubby little worms once bestowed with a chance , blessed with an opportunity to be light To be breathtaking… To be truly truly BEAUTIFUL.

06-03-2010, 01:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
Hasnalogy Registered User Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 10	hit me up with some commentary.. your opinon counts! Hey everyone I was just checking in.. 60 Views of my poem but not ONE COMMENT come on yall !

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