Random Thoughts Thread

A · 05-20-2010, 07:48 AM

This thread is for those who want to improve their writing. The rule is each time you reply to a person, quote the person with the CORRECT way of writing so they can see the different.

Frisky Feline · 05-20-2010, 08:40 AM

ah, I am too shy but I am willing to take a risk for someone to correct my english. For you, A, are you female or male. My guess is female.

A · 05-20-2010, 09:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frisky Feline

Ah, I am too shy, but I am willing to take a risk for someone to correct my English. For you, A, are you female or male? My guess is female.

I'm a female. I'm shy too, and I am not confidence with my writing nor proofreading . I'm hoping someone with great writing skills will join our thread.

BelleSorrisa · 05-20-2010, 09:28 AM

Okay - I'll start.

Quote:

Originally Posted by A

I'm a female. I'm shy too, and I am not confident with my writing or proofreading skills. I'm hoping someone with great writing skills will join our thread.

A · 05-20-2010, 09:30 AM

Thanks, I can see the big difference

**Bottesini** · 05-20-2010, 09:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by A

This thread is for those who want to improve their writing. The rule is each time you reply to a person, quote the person with the CORRECT way of writing so they can see the different.

"difference"

I love this thread!!

A · 05-20-2010, 09:33 AM

Put the correction in the quote. You can highlight it if you want. I'm trying to keep this thread fun and casual so people will keep posting.

rockin'robin · 05-20-2010, 09:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bottesini

"difference"

I love this thread!!

Ditto!

BelleSorrisa · 05-20-2010, 09:50 AM

I can't wait for the weekend to come. Its been a long week and I need a break. I have not recieved my book in the mail yet. That is wierd because I ordered it few weeks ago.

There you go, have fun correcting me

**Bottesini** · 05-20-2010, 09:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BelleSorrisa

I can't wait for the weekend to come. Its been a long week and I need a break. I have notreceived my book in the mail yet. That is weirdbecause I ordered it few weeks ago.

There you go, have fun correcting me

A · 05-20-2010, 02:26 PM

I hope this thread will not flop.

quirkylibra · 05-20-2010, 03:39 PM

What a great idea! I like this thread a lot! I make a lot of dumb grammar mistakes! Most of them are spelling though.

A · 05-20-2010, 04:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BelleSorrisa

I can't wait for the weekend to come. It's been a long week and I need a break. I have not received my book in the mail yet. That is weird because I ordered it few weeks ago.

There you go, have fun correcting me

What is the name of your book?

**Bottesini** · 05-20-2010, 06:47 PM

I hope it doesn't flop too! Grammar is not my strong point. I am only a spelling fanatic.

Glenn · 05-20-2010, 06:59 PM

Here's something:

"...to boldly go where no man has gone before."

***naisho*** · 05-21-2010, 09:40 AM

^ Sounds like a well known quote, needs no fixing. "If it ain't broke dont' fix it"*

Someone get this show on the road! Master Bottesini awaits prospective writers with great anticipation.

* not my words

Glenn · 05-21-2010, 01:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naisho

^ Sounds like a well known quote, needs no fixing. "If it ain't broke dont' fix it"*

Someone get this show on the road! Master Bottesini awaits prospective writers with great anticipation.

* not my words

It's a split infinitive.

A · 05-21-2010, 04:57 PM

Ain't is not a word.

Babyblue · 05-21-2010, 06:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by A

Ain't is not a word.

Aren't is a word.

A · 05-21-2010, 08:12 PM

If people don't want to reply, they can make corrections

Babyblue · 05-21-2010, 11:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by A

If people don't want to reply, they can make corrections

If people don't want to reply, they can make corrections.

(You need to add a period at the end of your sentence.)

***naisho*** · 05-21-2010, 11:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by A

Ain't is not a word.

Yep, "ain't" is not an officially recognized word within the English language. But it is still majorly used across the USA hands down, without any doubts. Even "Yep" is too.
How would you suggest, if given the opportunity, that they [linguistic professions] address the issue?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Babyblue

(You need to add a period at the end of your sentence.)

Hi, Babyblue.

BelleSorrisa · 05-24-2010, 09:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bottesini

One more correction is missing.

quirkylibra · 05-24-2010, 10:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BelleSorrisa

I can't wait for the weekend to come. It's been a long week and I need a break. I have not received my book in the mail yet. That is weird because I ordered it few weeks ago.

There you go, have fun correcting me

I think I found it.

**Bottesini** · 05-24-2010, 10:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BelleSorrisa

One more correction is missing.

Sadly, I always mess those up. I had better retire.

***naisho*** · 05-24-2010, 10:55 AM

Here's something to get this show started.

Hello Sir
how are you?
this is P.C.
we are the team of writers and expert in writing.
we are 100% PLAGIARISM FREE we provide HIGH quality of work and we always avoid copyscape and we are having 3-5 years of experience in content writing and having list of hundreds of satisfied clients.
I have attached some of the samples of our recent work
which will help you to evaluate our work
please replay me in each case as soon as possible

actually i am work provider my writers are excellent in english we are having a lot of satisfied clients who still wants to work with us please i request you to check the samples send by me kindly check the sample please than go to any desicion

regards
P.C.

BelleSorrisa · 05-24-2010, 11:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by quirkylibra

I think I found it.

Bingo! You got it!

A · 05-24-2010, 01:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naisho

Here's something to get this show started.

Hello Sir;

How are you? This is P.C. We are the team of writers and expert in writing.
We are 100% PLAGIARISM FREE! We provide HIGH quality of work , always avoid copyscape, have 3-5 years of experience in content, and have list of hundreds of satisfied clients.

I have attached some of the samples of our recent work which will help you to evaluate our work. Please replay me in each case as soon as possible.

Actually, I am work provider and my writers are excellent in English. We are having a lot of satisfied clients who still want to work with us. Please, I request you to check the samples sent by me. Kindly check the sample, please, than go to any decision.

Regards,
P.C.

That was hard. Some of the sentences didn't make sense.

Milli · 05-25-2010, 03:24 AM

I'm not exactly getting how this works?

KevinG · 05-25-2010, 06:09 AM

When I'm writing I never know when to use a comma, I wonder if I've got it right here ? Kevin.

05-20-2010, 07:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
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05-20-2010, 08:40 AM	#2 (permalink)
Frisky Feline Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 20,230	ah, I am too shy but I am willing to take a risk for someone to correct my english. For you, A, are you female or male. My guess is female.

05-20-2010, 09:30 AM	#5 (permalink)
A Banned Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,180 Blog Entries: 1	Thanks, I can see the big difference

05-20-2010, 09:33 AM	#7 (permalink)
A Banned Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,180 Blog Entries: 1	Put the correction in the quote. You can highlight it if you want. I'm trying to keep this thread fun and casual so people will keep posting.

05-20-2010, 09:50 AM	#9 (permalink)
BelleSorrisa Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 246	I can't wait for the weekend to come. Its been a long week and I need a break. I have not recieved my book in the mail yet. That is wierd because I ordered it few weeks ago. There you go, have fun correcting me

05-20-2010, 02:26 PM	#11 (permalink)
A Banned Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,180 Blog Entries: 1	I hope this thread will not flop.

05-20-2010, 03:39 PM	#12 (permalink)
quirkylibra Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 1,702	What a great idea! I like this thread a lot! I make a lot of dumb grammar mistakes! Most of them are spelling though.

05-20-2010, 06:59 PM	#15 (permalink)
Glenn Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Washington Posts: 2,909	Here's something: "...to boldly go where no man has gone before."

05-21-2010, 09:40 AM	#16 (permalink)
*naisho* Forum Disorders M.D.,Ph.D Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 6,162	^ Sounds like a well known quote, needs no fixing. "If it ain't broke dont' fix it"* Someone get this show on the road! Master Bottesini awaits prospective writers with great anticipation. * not my words

05-21-2010, 04:57 PM	#18 (permalink)
A Banned Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,180 Blog Entries: 1	Ain't is not a word.

05-21-2010, 08:12 PM	#20 (permalink)
A Banned Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,180 Blog Entries: 1	If people don't want to reply, they can make corrections

05-24-2010, 10:55 AM	#26 (permalink)
*naisho* Forum Disorders M.D.,Ph.D Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 6,162	Here's something to get this show started. Hello Sir how are you? this is P.C. we are the team of writers and expert in writing. we are 100% PLAGIARISM FREE we provide HIGH quality of work and we always avoid copyscape and we are having 3-5 years of experience in content writing and having list of hundreds of satisfied clients. I have attached some of the samples of our recent work which will help you to evaluate our work please replay me in each case as soon as possible actually i am work provider my writers are excellent in english we are having a lot of satisfied clients who still wants to work with us please i request you to check the samples send by me kindly check the sample please than go to any desicion regards P.C.

05-25-2010, 06:09 AM	#30 (permalink)
KevinG Registered User Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: England Posts: 175	When I'm writing I never know when to use a comma, I wonder if I've got it right here ? Kevin.