The Power of My Beloved Cheese

anakin · 01-08-2010, 11:31 AM

my sister was going through a box and found this. it's something i wrote for an assignment in middle school.

The Power of My Beloved Cheese

My cheese has died.
Oh the cheese, my cheese, it's making me cry.
Oh how I wish I could eat it now,
but I ask how
as I watch the mold,
it grows and grows, until I can take no more.
I bury my cheese, and cry alone.
Oh how the cheese has left me
to behold none of its power.
I whine about my cheese this hour,
but there is a side that tells me to devour
a new type of cheese that is full of power!
The new cheese is like a new love,
with the yellowness like a sick dove.
Oh no! The power of the new cheese is a tease,
so I cut the cheese.

i seriously don't remember writing this at all..

Tousi · 01-08-2010, 11:39 AM

Well, its certainly different!

**sequoias** · 01-08-2010, 11:53 AM

Good one there!

Milli · 01-11-2010, 05:42 AM

*Laugh out loud*....

That is one very different poem...

Well written though....

Well done

01-08-2010, 11:31 AM	#1 (permalink)
anakin Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: . Posts: 886	The Power of My Beloved Cheese my sister was going through a box and found this. it's something i wrote for an assignment in middle school. The Power of My Beloved Cheese My cheese has died. Oh the cheese, my cheese, it's making me cry. Oh how I wish I could eat it now, but I ask how as I watch the mold, it grows and grows, until I can take no more. I bury my cheese, and cry alone. Oh how the cheese has left me to behold none of its power. I whine about my cheese this hour, but there is a side that tells me to devour a new type of cheese that is full of power! The new cheese is like a new love, with the yellowness like a sick dove. Oh no! The power of the new cheese is a tease, so I cut the cheese. i seriously don't remember writing this at all..

01-11-2010, 05:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
Milli Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dublin Posts: 333 Blog Entries: 5	Laugh out loud.... That is one very different poem... Well written though.... Well done __________________ Milli

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01-08-2010, 11:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
Tousi Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,798	Well, its certainly different!

01-08-2010, 11:53 AM	#3 (permalink)
sequoias Premium Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Iowa, wind generation capital Posts: 21,947	Good one there!