Enter the doors of Perception..

***candybrowneyes*** · 01-17-2009, 04:35 PM

This is something I wrote a few years ago but I still believe today.. Feedback if you feel like it

Enter the doors of Perception

Open your eyes, enter the doors of perception.

Use your mind and knowledge to concieve full conception.

Cause the grass ain't greener on the other genocide,

But in Unity we'll achieve Peace & Freedom worldwide.

What you see is not what you get,

Senses are quite decieving.

Your eyes and ears provide an image that can be misleading.

My words are meant to help open your eyes- to motivate.

They're spoken to encourage conscious living and innovate.

Real eyes, Realize, Real Lies,

They see through the mass deception and feed the audience all the truth the media has failed to mention.

This life is a journey,

With no actual destination,

Everything is connected like a chain reaction.

Spreading genorosity- feeding knowledge consistantly,

While learning as much as you can,

Acting and speaking intelligently.

What starts, has got to end,

Wether you want it to or not.

Move on but make sure the past is not forgot.

A balanced life we all must learn to maintain,

Equality, freedom and ONE LOVE we must encourage,

And than finally we must learn to sustain.

Arizona Girl · 09-27-2009, 01:56 AM

Hi CandyBrownEyes,
I've got to say, from reading your poem, you are obviously a very
intelligent person and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on this
forum. Forgive me for saying, you asked for feedback, and I sense
a person who is perceptive from what I read but I also sense a per-
son who wants to be understood. Am I right or mis-reading in between
the lines? In either case, I think you're writing is well stated and I hope
you continue to write.

Arizona Girl (Karen)

01-17-2009, 04:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
*candybrowneyes* Tangled in the InterWebz Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Iowa Posts: 583 Blog Entries: 1	Enter the doors of Perception.. This is something I wrote a few years ago but I still believe today.. Feedback if you feel like it Enter the doors of Perception Open your eyes, enter the doors of perception. Use your mind and knowledge to concieve full conception. Cause the grass ain't greener on the other genocide, But in Unity we'll achieve Peace & Freedom worldwide. What you see is not what you get, Senses are quite decieving. Your eyes and ears provide an image that can be misleading. My words are meant to help open your eyes- to motivate. They're spoken to encourage conscious living and innovate. Real eyes, Realize, Real Lies, They see through the mass deception and feed the audience all the truth the media has failed to mention. This life is a journey, With no actual destination, Everything is connected like a chain reaction. Spreading genorosity- feeding knowledge consistantly, While learning as much as you can, Acting and speaking intelligently. What starts, has got to end, Wether you want it to or not. Move on but make sure the past is not forgot. A balanced life we all must learn to maintain, Equality, freedom and ONE LOVE we must encourage, And than finally we must learn to sustain. __________________ Love is the force that transforms and improves the soul of the world...

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09-27-2009, 01:56 AM	#2 (permalink)
Arizona Girl Registered User Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 12	Hi CandyBrownEyes, I've got to say, from reading your poem, you are obviously a very intelligent person and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on this forum. Forgive me for saying, you asked for feedback, and I sense a person who is perceptive from what I read but I also sense a per- son who wants to be understood. Am I right or mis-reading in between the lines? In either case, I think you're writing is well stated and I hope you continue to write. Arizona Girl (Karen)