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Unread 09-05-2008, 09:14 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Will someone leave a comment

I see some people read my fairy tale..or perhaps just looked at it and thought it was to long to bother with..i am disappointed no one even bothered to leave a comment..
I thought this would be a placeto get our feeling our write from the heart..i wrote this tale some months back and it holds a special place in my heart ..so come on people..say something...
I don't care if you don't likeit or understand it..just say something.......ugh!
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Unread 09-05-2008, 09:18 AM   #2 (permalink)
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can you post a link to your story?

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Unread 09-05-2008, 11:58 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I tried to respond to your visitor message on my page, but you seem to have disabled messaging and visitor posts for yourself?

I fear you won't like my response to your story, but you asked quite forcefully.
I thought your heroine was an angry passive-aggressive. In real life, I would avoid her like the plague.
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Unread 09-05-2008, 12:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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If it makes you feel any better, not many people have looked at mine or commented. :-) Go to pearlsoup.com, they always leave comments.
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Unread 09-07-2008, 07:45 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Peace.... where is a link to your fairy tale. How would one find it in order to read it?
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Unread 09-07-2008, 08:35 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I tried to respond to your visitor message on my page, but you seem to have disabled messaging and visitor posts for yourself?

I fear you won't like my response to your story, but you asked quite forcefully.
I thought your heroine was an angry passive-aggressive. In real life, I would avoid her like the plague.
I just got your next visitor message, but I still find yours to be disabled to me.

When you asked for comment, I did not know you are widowed and this is your personal autobiographical story.

I apologize. I would not have been so blunt if I knew what it was about.
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Unread 09-07-2008, 08:40 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I see some people read my fairy tale..or perhaps just looked at it and thought it was to long to bother with..i am disappointed no one even bothered to leave a comment..
I thought this would be a placeto get our feeling our write from the heart..i wrote this tale some months back and it holds a special place in my heart ..so come on people..say something...
I don't care if you don't likeit or understand it..just say something.......ugh!
Geez..what what was I thinking..I am so sorry for allowing my frustration to bubble and explode..lol...onto you all..of course ..how would you even know where to look to read it to leave a comment..iI apologize truly to everyone for my childish behavior..I am one of those people who learn by being shown..and I am trying to figure out what is going on and how to do things corrently by reading the tutorials...(OMG) so.My story is under Creative Writing...it is called "A Fairy Tale..Perhaps" smile peace to you all!
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Unread 09-07-2008, 08:48 PM   #8 (permalink)
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To enable visitor messaging.

Click user cp. On your own page.

Go to edit options.

CHeck the square that says enable visitor messaging. I see others are leaving them for you but it won't work for me. So I am not certain of the problem.
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Unread 09-07-2008, 09:37 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Geez..what what was I thinking..I am so sorry for allowing my frustration to bubble and explode..lol...onto you all..of course ..how would you even know where to look to read it to leave a comment..iI apologize truly to everyone for my childish behavior..I am one of those people who learn by being shown..and I am trying to figure out what is going on and how to do things corrently by reading the tutorials...(OMG) so.My story is under Creative Writing...it is called "A Fairy Tale..Perhaps" smile peace to you all!
No worries. I found it and will post a comment after I read it.. For now if anyone want's to check it out here is the link.

http://www.alldeaf.com/creative-writ...e-perhaps.html
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dont feel bad I only got one comment on mine hahaha
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