A poem that I wrote today.

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 12:40 PM

Do you love me?
Or, do you not?
You told me once,
But I forgot.
So tell me again,
And tell me how to feel love.
So, I can love you back.
Is love flowing like a river?
Or beautiful feeling like a deep blue sea?
Love do flows
And, love is a beautiful feeling
Always
And, forever.
Love is special one
To you and me
Something like love
That we couldn't touch
Or see
Like it's in the air
But,
We could feel love
It's a beautiful feeling
To all of us.

I tried my best to write it since I wrote it today.

Just please don't copy it, thank you.

**TweetyBird** · 08-06-2008, 12:50 PM

wow u did good job!

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 12:53 PM

Thanks, Tweetybird. =)

DVDFreaker · 08-06-2008, 01:01 PM

I'm impressed, I can't write poems, I suck

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 01:28 PM

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Originally Posted by DVDFreaker

I'm impressed, I can't write poems, I suck

Thanks, but my teacher said that everybody can write poem. so you can.

DVDFreaker · 08-06-2008, 01:35 PM

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Originally Posted by WhisperHorse

Thanks, but my teacher said that everybody can write poem. so you can.

Not really because I am not creative at words

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 01:38 PM

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Originally Posted by DVDFreaker

Not really because I am not creative at words

Oh aw.. Song and Poem are creative at words. So you can give it a try if you are interesting to

but it's ok if you don't want to.

sunflowergal · 08-06-2008, 01:40 PM

It is beautiful poem.

DVDFreaker · 08-06-2008, 01:42 PM

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Originally Posted by WhisperHorse

Oh aw.. Song and Poem are creative at words. So you can give it a try if you are interesting to

but it's ok if you don't want to.

I can try but it would suck but if it was a song then it wouldn't suck

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 01:45 PM

Thanks, ArkieGal!

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 01:45 PM

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Originally Posted by DVDFreaker

I can try but it would suck but if it was a song then it wouldn't suck

Aw, I guess your best at writing a song then. =)

**sequoias** · 08-06-2008, 01:46 PM

Wow, thats a beautiful poem you wrote for today.

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 01:47 PM

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Originally Posted by sequoias

Wow, thats a beautiful poem you wrote for today.

Thanks!

**sequoias** · 08-06-2008, 01:51 PM

You're welcome and

DVDFreaker · 08-06-2008, 02:01 PM

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Originally Posted by sequoias

You're welcome and

You and Whisperhorse needs to get back together

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 02:04 PM

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Originally Posted by DVDFreaker

You and Whisperhorse needs to get back together

Give me a big reason why.

But, he and I decided to be friends that's it. I apologize.

DVDFreaker · 08-06-2008, 02:07 PM

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Originally Posted by WhisperHorse

Give me a big reason why.

But, he and I decided to be friends that's it. I apologize.

Because you both make a cute couple

That's cool you both are friends, better than ending on bad terms

CrzyMeg · 08-06-2008, 03:32 PM

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Originally Posted by DVDFreaker

I'm impressed, I can't write poems, I suck

I can!

**Jolie77** · 08-06-2008, 04:24 PM

That's a nice poem, WhisperHorse.

I can see you'll be able to write more down the road and to thrive as well.

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 04:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Jolie77

That's a nice poem, WhisperHorse.

I can see you'll be able to write more down the road and to thrive as well.

Thanks!

DVDFreaker · 08-06-2008, 04:49 PM

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Originally Posted by CrzyMeg

I can!

Write me a poem!

CrzyMeg · 08-06-2008, 04:53 PM

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Originally Posted by DVDFreaker

Write me a poem!

whoa. That take time!

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 04:54 PM

CrzyMeg-

I don't want to be mean. Please don't do that in my thread. I would like to see your poem that you write. Just please do that in your own thread. I'm sorry. I hope you will understand since I made this thread to sharing with people from my writing.

I hope you will understand.

But thanks.

CrzyMeg · 08-06-2008, 04:56 PM

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Originally Posted by WhisperHorse

CrzyMeg-

I don't want to be mean. Please don't do that in my thread. I would like to see your poem that you write. Just please do that in your own thread. I'm sorry. I hope you will understand since I made this thread to sharing with people from my writing.

I hope you will understand.

But thanks.

I am not planning to do that. I already have my thread of my poems. I do understand. I know how you feel.

WhisperHorse · 08-06-2008, 04:59 PM

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Originally Posted by CrzyMeg

I am not planning to do that. I already have my thread of my poems. I do understand. I know how you feel.

Thanks so much for understand

CrzyMeg · 08-06-2008, 05:02 PM

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Originally Posted by WhisperHorse

Thanks so much for understand

It not a problem.

**Jolie77** · 08-06-2008, 05:19 PM

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Originally Posted by WhisperHorse

Thanks!

You're welcome.

***~SG~*** · 08-07-2008, 05:24 AM

It is a very beautiful poem.

08-06-2008, 12:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
WhisperHorse Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Michigan Posts: 7,706	A poem that I wrote today. Do you love me? Or, do you not? You told me once, But I forgot. So tell me again, And tell me how to feel love. So, I can love you back. Is love flowing like a river? Or beautiful feeling like a deep blue sea? Love do flows And, love is a beautiful feeling Always And, forever. Love is special one To you and me Something like love That we couldn't touch Or see Like it's in the air But, We could feel love It's a beautiful feeling To all of us. I tried my best to write it since I wrote it today. Just please don't copy it, thank you. __________________ Proud Mommy of my Alexanderia Gayle Born on May 21, 2008 8 lbs 1.4 oz and 21 1/2 inches She's the love of my life. Weight; lose 13 lbs since June 23, 2009 Haven't drink any kind of soda(like pepsi, coke, dr pepper, anyyyy) since July 12, 2009!

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WhisperHorse Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Michigan Posts: 7,706	Thanks, Tweetybird. =) __________________ Proud Mommy of my Alexanderia Gayle Born on May 21, 2008 8 lbs 1.4 oz and 21 1/2 inches She's the love of my life. Weight; lose 13 lbs since June 23, 2009 Haven't drink any kind of soda(like pepsi, coke, dr pepper, anyyyy) since July 12, 2009!

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WhisperHorse Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Michigan Posts: 7,706	CrzyMeg- I don't want to be mean. Please don't do that in my thread. I would like to see your poem that you write. Just please do that in your own thread. I'm sorry. I hope you will understand since I made this thread to sharing with people from my writing. I hope you will understand. But thanks. __________________ Proud Mommy of my Alexanderia Gayle Born on May 21, 2008 8 lbs 1.4 oz and 21 1/2 inches She's the love of my life. Weight; lose 13 lbs since June 23, 2009 Haven't drink any kind of soda(like pepsi, coke, dr pepper, anyyyy) since July 12, 2009!

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