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Old 06-17-2008, 10:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The Beauty Within - A Free-Style Poem
Breathless and still, my stomach is heavy as a stone.

The floating emptiness inching towards the heavens of my mouth.

The blood in my veins circulate through my body, above the chaos of abdomen.

The inner tubing of my chest carries the thud that beats from my heart to the left ear.

The collar bone, lying above this network of tissue, resists against my spandex skin:

A beauty of the Jurassic kind.
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Old 06-18-2008, 03:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow, I'm wordless.
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Old 06-18-2008, 09:05 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks.
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Old 06-20-2008, 09:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice poem. Native American used this quote which I love it, Walk in Beauty.
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Old 08-20-2008, 11:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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That was good
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Old 08-21-2008, 08:52 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Wow, that was great. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 09-27-2009, 01:57 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I truly like your poem. Thanks for sharing it.
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