Here's my poem

Deafghostfreak · 04-25-2003, 02:45 PM

"Tomorrow,tomorrow"

Tomorrow,tomorrow
What a great day
I love ya
tomorrow, I will see beauiful island
tomorrow,tomorrow
What a hectic day
I love ya
tomorrow,I will see you grow tall!
tomorrow,tomorrow
I love ya guys!
How wonderful are ya!
tomorrow, I will see dolphins jumps over around ocean
tomorrow,tomorrow
tomorrow will be not same
I love ya
what a day
What a beauiful land
Tomorrow,tomorrow
pain will not same
hopefully tomorrow is all fresh new
tomorrow,tomorrow

Hope you guys like my poem

Fly Free · 04-25-2003, 02:47 PM

reminds me of the classic movie ANNIE with her theme song "Tomorrow" --

but is a well written poem

Teekie · 05-17-2003, 04:31 AM

That's what that poem reminded me of.. but a good poem tho

nozobo · 05-17-2003, 04:33 AM

TMW TMW ILY TMW YOU'RE ONLY A DAY AWAY!!!! LOL

Teekie · 05-17-2003, 04:37 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by pimpdaddyposse
TMW TMW ILY TMW YOU'RE ONLY A DAY AWAY!!!! LOL

Deafghostfreak · 05-17-2003, 09:33 AM

Thanks, Teekie

SilenceGold · 05-17-2003, 04:04 PM

Nice classic touch to a hopeful future outlook.

javapride · 05-21-2003, 03:38 PM

heheh CUTE poem WTG

and it DOES remind me of ANNIE movie

05-21-2003, 04:44 PM

nice poem Deafghostfreak

Deafghostfreak · 05-21-2003, 09:26 PM

Thanks, Goldenleaf and Javapride

crazyerica32 · 05-24-2003, 05:41 PM

04-25-2003, 02:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
Deafghostfreak Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Masschusetts Posts: 217	Here's my poem "Tomorrow,tomorrow" Tomorrow,tomorrow What a great day I love ya tomorrow, I will see beauiful island tomorrow,tomorrow What a hectic day I love ya tomorrow,I will see you grow tall! tomorrow,tomorrow I love ya guys! How wonderful are ya! tomorrow, I will see dolphins jumps over around ocean tomorrow,tomorrow tomorrow will be not same I love ya what a day What a beauiful land Tomorrow,tomorrow pain will not same hopefully tomorrow is all fresh new tomorrow,tomorrow Hope you guys like my poem

04-25-2003, 02:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
Fly Free Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Roosted in the DC area! Posts: 9,101	reminds me of the classic movie ANNIE with her theme song "Tomorrow" -- but is a well written poem __________________ Enjoying life!

05-17-2003, 04:31 AM	#3 (permalink)
Teekie Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 1,929	That's what that poem reminded me of.. but a good poem tho __________________ Proud Momma to: ~Austin- 5/11/00 ~Kieran- 2/6/03 ~Sean- 9/23/04

05-17-2003, 04:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
nozobo Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Denver, CO Posts: 3,944	TMW TMW ILY TMW YOU'RE ONLY A DAY AWAY!!!! LOL __________________ My roots are planted in the past And though my life is changin' fast Who I am is who I wanna be...

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05-17-2003, 09:33 AM	#6 (permalink)
Deafghostfreak Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Masschusetts Posts: 217	Thanks, Teekie

05-17-2003, 04:04 PM	#7 (permalink)
SilenceGold Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 3,508	Nice classic touch to a hopeful future outlook.

05-21-2003, 03:38 PM	#8 (permalink)
javapride Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: hawaii Posts: 6,511	heheh CUTE poem WTG and it DOES remind me of ANNIE movie

05-21-2003, 04:44 PM	#9 (permalink)
GoldenLeaf74 Guest Posts: n/a	nice poem Deafghostfreak

05-21-2003, 09:26 PM	#10 (permalink)
Deafghostfreak Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Masschusetts Posts: 217	Thanks, Goldenleaf and Javapride

05-24-2003, 05:41 PM	#11 (permalink)
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