Shadow
Posted 11-10-2007 at 08:35 AM by geekchick
I walking into shadow
wounder somewhere else
feel so cold
hard to see
everything is black
empty of a sound
I turn a world into dark
everything is gone
no one is around me
i must be a last human
on this Earth
it's a stranger world
only i can feel the objects
bumps out of nowhere
i am in the void
feel so cold
alone in a lost world
I walking into shadow
my foot on the ground
rough and shape
i picked a thing
it's so cold
throw away
turn around and walk away
i can hear a smashing of stranger sound
there is a light
right in my eyes
so bright
someone called me
i just crossing over
into the light
i am not walking into shadow any more......
wounder somewhere else
feel so cold
hard to see
everything is black
empty of a sound
I turn a world into dark
everything is gone
no one is around me
i must be a last human
on this Earth
it's a stranger world
only i can feel the objects
bumps out of nowhere
i am in the void
feel so cold
alone in a lost world
I walking into shadow
my foot on the ground
rough and shape
i picked a thing
it's so cold
throw away
turn around and walk away
i can hear a smashing of stranger sound
there is a light
right in my eyes
so bright
someone called me
i just crossing over
into the light
i am not walking into shadow any more......
Total Comments 2
Comments
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oh my gosh
this is amazing. i know i'm not a poet but i am in my ap english class and we studied a lot of poetry by really amazing dead guys. this could definatly be compared to them. i hope that you write more. i would love to see it.Posted 07-29-2008 at 11:44 AM by murphyslaw
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Geekchick. Keep up the good work. The nation's looking for the next Maya Angelou!Posted 06-25-2009 at 08:19 PM by bigmac41
