Painful Life
Posted 10-29-2007 at 06:45 PM by geekchick
Someone was born
have love and freedom
few years later
life pathway change
everyone was screaming
running on the road
find a freedom pathway
fork stuck on the road
dark cloud crosses over
heavy rain as hailstorm
run hide in corners
Gestapo was march
cold blood become goosebump
pray the god for help
there is no help
god steals our soul
getting darker
worst depressed
someone caught
army
torture us
blood everywhere on the body
feel pain of death
throw into train
treat us like animal
inside terrible smell
a death body
in the corners
everyone was fear and cried
dream about freedom and peace
train was stop
army was shouted
off the train
heavy dark cloud
look up sign
'Welcome to hell'
our eyes can see
terrible things
army throws the babies
up in the air
shooting
blood like firework
children and adult were hang up
smokes coming out from chimney
like a ghost
pulled us into hell
army was line up
from both sides
men left side
female right side
screaming and break heart
thundered like drum
army took out clothes and jewels off
walk in nude
painful life
that night we will never forget
army throws us into the oven
lying down
hitting and kick the wall
wanted getting out oven
smell terrible
gas was on
our bodies drop
breath slowly
eyes closed
heart beat stop
eyes open again
there are full white
our soul
was in the heaven.
have love and freedom
few years later
life pathway change
everyone was screaming
running on the road
find a freedom pathway
fork stuck on the road
dark cloud crosses over
heavy rain as hailstorm
run hide in corners
Gestapo was march
cold blood become goosebump
pray the god for help
there is no help
god steals our soul
getting darker
worst depressed
someone caught
army
torture us
blood everywhere on the body
feel pain of death
throw into train
treat us like animal
inside terrible smell
a death body
in the corners
everyone was fear and cried
dream about freedom and peace
train was stop
army was shouted
off the train
heavy dark cloud
look up sign
'Welcome to hell'
our eyes can see
terrible things
army throws the babies
up in the air
shooting
blood like firework
children and adult were hang up
smokes coming out from chimney
like a ghost
pulled us into hell
army was line up
from both sides
men left side
female right side
screaming and break heart
thundered like drum
army took out clothes and jewels off
walk in nude
painful life
that night we will never forget
army throws us into the oven
lying down
hitting and kick the wall
wanted getting out oven
smell terrible
gas was on
our bodies drop
breath slowly
eyes closed
heart beat stop
eyes open again
there are full white
our soul
was in the heaven.
Total Comments 3
Comments
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You must have dreamt about Auschwitz or similar? Very descriptive paint pictures with words is hard thing to do, especially with emotion...Glad nightmare has happy ending...I love happy endings...DeafboyOnePosted 11-02-2007 at 10:02 PM by DeafboyOne
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Wow. I really like the dark and deep poem. And it is always nice to be able to open the eyes from the pain and see that we're in heaven and at peace at the end.Posted 09-26-2009 at 12:16 AM by daystarnite
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Mmm, this is a good question... I read a book in english class called "Night" by Elie Wiesel based on his experience, as a young Orthodox Jew, of being sent with his family to the German concentration camps at Auschwitz and Buchenwald during the Second World War.Quote:Originally Posted by DeafboyOne
You must have dreamt about Auschwitz or similar? Very descriptive paint pictures with words is hard thing to do, especially with emotion...Glad nightmare has happy ending...I love happy endings...DeafboyOne
I meet some of survivals from death camp during my school task. Also, my great-great uncle was a solider and great-great aunty was a nurse in the during WWII.
I tried to paint the picture myself in death camp experience as a free-verse poem is part of my end of the year english exam. None of my classmates can writing in poem or creative.Posted 09-28-2009 at 09:33 PM by geekchick
