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Painful Life

Posted 10-29-2007 at 06:45 PM by geekchick

Someone was born

have love and freedom

few years later

life pathway change

everyone was screaming

running on the road

find a freedom pathway

fork stuck on the road

dark cloud crosses over

heavy rain as hailstorm

run hide in corners

Gestapo was march

cold blood become goosebump

pray the god for help

there is no help

god steals our soul

getting darker

worst depressed

someone caught

army

torture us

blood everywhere on the body

feel pain of death

throw into train

treat us like animal

inside terrible smell

a death body

in the corners

everyone was fear and cried

dream about freedom and peace

train was stop

army was shouted

off the train

heavy dark cloud

look up sign

'Welcome to hell'

our eyes can see

terrible things

army throws the babies

up in the air

shooting

blood like firework

children and adult were hang up

smokes coming out from chimney

like a ghost

pulled us into hell

army was line up

from both sides

men left side

female right side

screaming and break heart

thundered like drum

army took out clothes and jewels off

walk in nude

painful life

that night we will never forget

army throws us into the oven

lying down

hitting and kick the wall

wanted getting out oven

smell terrible

gas was on

our bodies drop

breath slowly

eyes closed

heart beat stop

eyes open again

there are full white

our soul

was in the heaven.
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    DeafboyOne's Avatar
    You must have dreamt about Auschwitz or similar? Very descriptive paint pictures with words is hard thing to do, especially with emotion...Glad nightmare has happy ending...I love happy endings...DeafboyOne
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    Wow. I really like the dark and deep poem. And it is always nice to be able to open the eyes from the pain and see that we're in heaven and at peace at the end.
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    Posted 09-26-2009 at 12:16 AM by daystarnite daystarnite is offline
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    Quote:
    Originally Posted by DeafboyOne View Comment
    You must have dreamt about Auschwitz or similar? Very descriptive paint pictures with words is hard thing to do, especially with emotion...Glad nightmare has happy ending...I love happy endings...DeafboyOne
    Mmm, this is a good question... I read a book in english class called "Night" by Elie Wiesel based on his experience, as a young Orthodox Jew, of being sent with his family to the German concentration camps at Auschwitz and Buchenwald during the Second World War.

    I meet some of survivals from death camp during my school task. Also, my great-great uncle was a solider and great-great aunty was a nurse in the during WWII.

    I tried to paint the picture myself in death camp experience as a free-verse poem is part of my end of the year english exam. None of my classmates can writing in poem or creative.
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    Posted 09-28-2009 at 09:33 PM by geekchick geekchick is offline
 

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