Chase ...
Chapter One:
The word, ‘dance, danced, dances, dancer’ ... is that too many for a chapter?
Chapter Two: a much better revision of this chapter
USDA (choice) ... huh?
‘Just as crazy were sandals with heels, no socks’ (that’s a fashion no-no to wear socks with sandals) ... stockings or nylons?
Chapter Three: cannot see any mistakes there
All three chapters, excellently written
